for Akane no Mai1/28/2022 c41 
7Chaosblazer
nice to see this story back.
Granted it's total chaos with the crimson group, man they are definitely different.
So much fighting and insanity, could only come from something as well constructed as these stories.
So he's going to redo the story yet keep it up, seems to be a trend these days.
Keep up the awesome work dude this story is awesome
7Chaosblazernice to see this story back.
Granted it's total chaos with the crimson group, man they are definitely different.
So much fighting and insanity, could only come from something as well constructed as these stories.
So he's going to redo the story yet keep it up, seems to be a trend these days.
Keep up the awesome work dude this story is awesome
9/19/2021 c40 Generic Reviewer
Wow, the Plesiosaur stuff was a lot faster than normal. Now we're headed to the next Yami Matter event; that lead to a lotta fun stuff in the original. Still more curious if the Akechi drama will ever escalate beyond him being very nervous and awkward.
Laters.
Wow, the Plesiosaur stuff was a lot faster than normal. Now we're headed to the next Yami Matter event; that lead to a lotta fun stuff in the original. Still more curious if the Akechi drama will ever escalate beyond him being very nervous and awkward.
Laters.
9/18/2021 c40 5Darth Necron
You know its based off anime when you have a beach episode/ chapter.
Well, at least we got Morgana getting some time to shine amiss all the romance and Teke bashing.
5Darth NecronYou know its based off anime when you have a beach episode/ chapter.
Well, at least we got Morgana getting some time to shine amiss all the romance and Teke bashing.
9/18/2021 c40 7Chaosblazer
really great chapter, nice change of pace from the last one which was mostly action this one having action and down time.
not surprised to see another couple hook up, and the underwater stuff was indeed something i thought i recoginzed
interesting tidbits about the fighting, of course the plesioaur form attacks are based off those two senshi it all fits.
Great work man this was awesome, looking forward to what comes next
7Chaosblazerreally great chapter, nice change of pace from the last one which was mostly action this one having action and down time.
not surprised to see another couple hook up, and the underwater stuff was indeed something i thought i recoginzed
interesting tidbits about the fighting, of course the plesioaur form attacks are based off those two senshi it all fits.
Great work man this was awesome, looking forward to what comes next
9/18/2021 c40 15Allfather-Ford
The protagonists are fighting and defeating the Teke Teke. Seeing the lifestyle of Mia’s apartment with Morgana around and raising her little brother, Shiho comes to visit her.
And the main event shows the beach chapter. There are a lot of fun moments such as Hifumi and Skyler having an underwater kiss, and Mia giving Shiho a suntan. Then a flashback shows how Nicola and Shinya become friends as kids in the arcade.
Suddenly, two plesiosaur cryptids appear in the beach. The protagonists and with the four kids manage to stop them and cure them from the YM. Haha, I chuckle of imagine Shinya and Nicola are a yaoi/shotacon couple. This ends with Mia and Shiho have their first kiss.
Next chapter is going to be an interesting crimson one.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordThe protagonists are fighting and defeating the Teke Teke. Seeing the lifestyle of Mia’s apartment with Morgana around and raising her little brother, Shiho comes to visit her.
And the main event shows the beach chapter. There are a lot of fun moments such as Hifumi and Skyler having an underwater kiss, and Mia giving Shiho a suntan. Then a flashback shows how Nicola and Shinya become friends as kids in the arcade.
Suddenly, two plesiosaur cryptids appear in the beach. The protagonists and with the four kids manage to stop them and cure them from the YM. Haha, I chuckle of imagine Shinya and Nicola are a yaoi/shotacon couple. This ends with Mia and Shiho have their first kiss.
Next chapter is going to be an interesting crimson one.
Phila-Del-Phia!
9/11/2021 c39 5Darth Necron
With Cammy being the " Neo Yami Hoo" she's like the Rachel Grey to your multiverse, we will see, with the Black Heralds on top of everything we are getting as big a party as some of my own stories lol.
Still, even more Vamkyries then you can shake a stick at this point, the Phantom Thieves could use some more back up but we will see, at least we got through this steamy fight, only to get to the even more steamy quadruple porn scene afterwards...Sae would not be happy.
Anyway...we will see what new batch of madness will break out next time.
5Darth NecronWith Cammy being the " Neo Yami Hoo" she's like the Rachel Grey to your multiverse, we will see, with the Black Heralds on top of everything we are getting as big a party as some of my own stories lol.
Still, even more Vamkyries then you can shake a stick at this point, the Phantom Thieves could use some more back up but we will see, at least we got through this steamy fight, only to get to the even more steamy quadruple porn scene afterwards...Sae would not be happy.
Anyway...we will see what new batch of madness will break out next time.
9/11/2021 c39 Generic Reviewer
The add-on villains feel a bit bloated but I really like the Neo Yami Phoenix. The yuri Vamkyries were the highlight for this chapter; I'd say they are my favorite of the nine outside Brunhilde. Gregorio is a shady dude but I really like him. The lemons are getting better, albeit still a bit cringe (I remember Crazyeight writing some pretty good lemons; I'd check their content if you wanna learn pacing NSFW from them; just a random shill).
Nothing else to comment on. Later days!
The add-on villains feel a bit bloated but I really like the Neo Yami Phoenix. The yuri Vamkyries were the highlight for this chapter; I'd say they are my favorite of the nine outside Brunhilde. Gregorio is a shady dude but I really like him. The lemons are getting better, albeit still a bit cringe (I remember Crazyeight writing some pretty good lemons; I'd check their content if you wanna learn pacing NSFW from them; just a random shill).
Nothing else to comment on. Later days!
9/11/2021 c39 7Chaosblazer
another dark houou makes me think of one woman in particular...she may not be a phoenix but was fused with another bird...
lots of fighting in this one, as well as some creepy but interesting points, someone not dieing from being decapitated, that's a unqiue moment.
At least everything got resolved in the end and the heroes are still in good shape, except for Akechi of course.
help or no help you still have the guts to write stuff like that, i'm more of a pure action person myself.
Keep up the awesome story man it keeps getting better.
7Chaosblazeranother dark houou makes me think of one woman in particular...she may not be a phoenix but was fused with another bird...
lots of fighting in this one, as well as some creepy but interesting points, someone not dieing from being decapitated, that's a unqiue moment.
At least everything got resolved in the end and the heroes are still in good shape, except for Akechi of course.
help or no help you still have the guts to write stuff like that, i'm more of a pure action person myself.
Keep up the awesome story man it keeps getting better.
9/11/2021 c39 15Allfather-Ford
Another original chapter featuring the battles against the Vamkyries, the Black Heralds, and the Reapress. The reveal that Black Hōō is likely Cammy’s sister, and Cambion attempts to rape Sudsakorn before being saved by Nephilim are some major highlights.
This is also the first time that we see few seconds deaths from the Revenants till they regenerate seconds later of brought back to life, just like anime Dark Souls, relating to the fact that they can only truly die when their BOR parasites/hearts are destroyed.
After which, the Vamkyries and the Black Heralds are driven off, while the Reapress is purified back to Sasha (of course a fragment of Reapress remains, but she’s going to become a valuable ally to the protagonists). Find it funny seeing Skyler giving a victory pose to Louis’s reaction, reminds me of the Gangnam Style song.
The threesome of Louis/Makoto/Haru is so erotic in a love hotel. The part when Makokins let out more profanity than Hifumi (Both Makoto and Hifumi saying ‘oh god’, while Haru doesn’t say that in showing that even Haru is more innocent in sex than Hifumi. Of course of all the main P5 girls (Ann, Makoto, Futaba, Hifumi), Haru is the most polite (more polite than Hifumi)/sweet/innocent despite having a sadistic side.), referring ‘Louie’ as vampboy, alongside saying who is the ‘best girl’ in competing Skyler makes me laugh. In the morning, they give cheers to their threesome relationship.
I gotta say that this is at times a difficult chapter of adding these new battles, following this are chapters (of one is a new chapter, the rest are revisions) that are breather/easy which are set before the fifth YM event.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordAnother original chapter featuring the battles against the Vamkyries, the Black Heralds, and the Reapress. The reveal that Black Hōō is likely Cammy’s sister, and Cambion attempts to rape Sudsakorn before being saved by Nephilim are some major highlights.
This is also the first time that we see few seconds deaths from the Revenants till they regenerate seconds later of brought back to life, just like anime Dark Souls, relating to the fact that they can only truly die when their BOR parasites/hearts are destroyed.
After which, the Vamkyries and the Black Heralds are driven off, while the Reapress is purified back to Sasha (of course a fragment of Reapress remains, but she’s going to become a valuable ally to the protagonists). Find it funny seeing Skyler giving a victory pose to Louis’s reaction, reminds me of the Gangnam Style song.
The threesome of Louis/Makoto/Haru is so erotic in a love hotel. The part when Makokins let out more profanity than Hifumi (Both Makoto and Hifumi saying ‘oh god’, while Haru doesn’t say that in showing that even Haru is more innocent in sex than Hifumi. Of course of all the main P5 girls (Ann, Makoto, Futaba, Hifumi), Haru is the most polite (more polite than Hifumi)/sweet/innocent despite having a sadistic side.), referring ‘Louie’ as vampboy, alongside saying who is the ‘best girl’ in competing Skyler makes me laugh. In the morning, they give cheers to their threesome relationship.
I gotta say that this is at times a difficult chapter of adding these new battles, following this are chapters (of one is a new chapter, the rest are revisions) that are breather/easy which are set before the fifth YM event.
Phila-Del-Phia!
8/22/2021 c38 Generic Reviewer
Was expecting the final Vamkyries to show up in a certain MotW from the original, but this is interesting new content. Mido is still very shady even if he remembers nothing (or so he says). Gregorio is a bit of an ass but I like that he's more developed than in the original.
Nothing else to say; laters!
Was expecting the final Vamkyries to show up in a certain MotW from the original, but this is interesting new content. Mido is still very shady even if he remembers nothing (or so he says). Gregorio is a bit of an ass but I like that he's more developed than in the original.
Nothing else to say; laters!