for Akane no Mai7/21/2024 c65 
5Darth Necron
Well time to kick Surter back to where he, oh wait wrong Ragnarok...doh. Eh...Gorr the God Butcher was right all these Gods deserve bad ends...so mostly a parade of spoiled entitled deities getting just desserts in a matter so brutal the fighters from Mortal Kombat would blush with...minor additions at best...at least the end's in sight till we can get back to the story and see what real changes are for the final stretch of Akane No Mai at last.
5Darth NecronWell time to kick Surter back to where he, oh wait wrong Ragnarok...doh. Eh...Gorr the God Butcher was right all these Gods deserve bad ends...so mostly a parade of spoiled entitled deities getting just desserts in a matter so brutal the fighters from Mortal Kombat would blush with...minor additions at best...at least the end's in sight till we can get back to the story and see what real changes are for the final stretch of Akane No Mai at last.
7/21/2024 c65 Generic Reviewer
Just as spicy and terrifying as the original. Not sure what the new commentary characters are for beyond wacky R18 shipping, but I do hope for them to explain more about our quirky miniboss squadron and Kriemhild's general chaos. Maybe even explain those two weird girls who turned into a demon and a 'biblically accurate' angel.
Later days! Keep up the good work!
Just as spicy and terrifying as the original. Not sure what the new commentary characters are for beyond wacky R18 shipping, but I do hope for them to explain more about our quirky miniboss squadron and Kriemhild's general chaos. Maybe even explain those two weird girls who turned into a demon and a 'biblically accurate' angel.
Later days! Keep up the good work!
7/21/2024 c65 15Allfather-Ford
Oh lookie, the Elivadisir have arrived to join the fun, much to the Norns dismay (and Verdandi’s furious anger). :P
Ragnarök begins. Brynhildr returns to destroy Asgard and killing Odin with petty vengeance like Kratos coming to Olympus to kill Zeus. Loki learns the truth of his family bloodline. One of my fave crowning moment of awesome moments is when Víðarr jumps in to fight some undead like Thor while Immigrant Song by Led Zeppelin plays (Like, it’s the first time that song is used in your stories) in also showcasing more battles in Ragnarök. Thrúd is killer by Surtr, while Mist is freed from Kriemhild’s control and is guilty of that and her petty behavior. The lesbian Valkyries getting rape is one of the biggest cheers to us and readers as payback for their hateful behaviors (Yes, you are clearly enjoying this, seeing you show your hatred to these lesbians), while making it erotic at the same time in retain a form of fanservice (unlike usual rapes that are treated seriously/horror and not fanservice).
Kriemhild then is gonna deliver something shocking that horrifies Brynhildr…
15Allfather-FordOh lookie, the Elivadisir have arrived to join the fun, much to the Norns dismay (and Verdandi’s furious anger). :P
Ragnarök begins. Brynhildr returns to destroy Asgard and killing Odin with petty vengeance like Kratos coming to Olympus to kill Zeus. Loki learns the truth of his family bloodline. One of my fave crowning moment of awesome moments is when Víðarr jumps in to fight some undead like Thor while Immigrant Song by Led Zeppelin plays (Like, it’s the first time that song is used in your stories) in also showcasing more battles in Ragnarök. Thrúd is killer by Surtr, while Mist is freed from Kriemhild’s control and is guilty of that and her petty behavior. The lesbian Valkyries getting rape is one of the biggest cheers to us and readers as payback for their hateful behaviors (Yes, you are clearly enjoying this, seeing you show your hatred to these lesbians), while making it erotic at the same time in retain a form of fanservice (unlike usual rapes that are treated seriously/horror and not fanservice).
Kriemhild then is gonna deliver something shocking that horrifies Brynhildr…
7/20/2024 c64 Allfather-Ford
Meanwhile, Kriemhild and Loki discuss about the origins of Völva, Grímhildr’s rose to power and conflict with Asgard, and how Kriemhild contacts with the dark matter itself (alongside her speech pattern changes). Högni and his harem have an orgy like a human male and his youma/daimon whores. Laugh at Grímhildr’s labor alongside her daughter making fun of it (Grímhildr’s personality and even her powers (such as fusing with her dragon is a cool moment for a difficult boss battle) is also expanded beyond her YYGDM self being cool minded).
Phila-Del-Phia!
Meanwhile, Kriemhild and Loki discuss about the origins of Völva, Grímhildr’s rose to power and conflict with Asgard, and how Kriemhild contacts with the dark matter itself (alongside her speech pattern changes). Högni and his harem have an orgy like a human male and his youma/daimon whores. Laugh at Grímhildr’s labor alongside her daughter making fun of it (Grímhildr’s personality and even her powers (such as fusing with her dragon is a cool moment for a difficult boss battle) is also expanded beyond her YYGDM self being cool minded).
Phila-Del-Phia!
7/19/2024 c64 5Darth Necron
And so this song that's never ending at least seems like we are at the final verse...once more Grimhide and Krimhid clash for who the bigger hide is, and it indeed the younger one.
With a few more lines we get to want I want to see...everyone of these #$#$'s dying painfully so see you at the blood bath.
5Darth NecronAnd so this song that's never ending at least seems like we are at the final verse...once more Grimhide and Krimhid clash for who the bigger hide is, and it indeed the younger one.
With a few more lines we get to want I want to see...everyone of these #$#$'s dying painfully so see you at the blood bath.
7/19/2024 c63 Darth Necron
Alright, once more a smaller chunk from Urban Legends with minor changes at best and more of "Persona Loki" reacting and Kriemhild's actions evolving to be to brutal for Game of Thrones now...though might fit right for the Boys I suppose.
We will see Balder 2's feedback amounts to anything soon I guess.
Alright, once more a smaller chunk from Urban Legends with minor changes at best and more of "Persona Loki" reacting and Kriemhild's actions evolving to be to brutal for Game of Thrones now...though might fit right for the Boys I suppose.
We will see Balder 2's feedback amounts to anything soon I guess.
7/18/2024 c64 Generic Reviewer
I like lore/backstory, but Kriemhild's was more of her mother's backstory if anything, which was kinda cool. I get the point behind it, but man I expected a bit more related to current Kriemhild before she made contact with the Yami Matter. Sex scenes and Pancake-kun being secretive aside, if felt like nothing happened.
Sorry for complaining; I'm probably just too hyped for Ragnarok/Berserk's Eclipse. Have a nice day!
I like lore/backstory, but Kriemhild's was more of her mother's backstory if anything, which was kinda cool. I get the point behind it, but man I expected a bit more related to current Kriemhild before she made contact with the Yami Matter. Sex scenes and Pancake-kun being secretive aside, if felt like nothing happened.
Sorry for complaining; I'm probably just too hyped for Ragnarok/Berserk's Eclipse. Have a nice day!
7/13/2024 c63 Gamelover41592
Excellent work on this chapter and sorry for the late review, i just got the app
Excellent work on this chapter and sorry for the late review, i just got the app
7/12/2024 c63 Generic Reviewer
Not much has changed from the Urban Legends stuff outside Akechi failing the speech check harder in the peanut gallery.
Looking forward for Kriemhild's backstory and the Eclipse!
Not much has changed from the Urban Legends stuff outside Akechi failing the speech check harder in the peanut gallery.
Looking forward for Kriemhild's backstory and the Eclipse!
7/12/2024 c63 15Allfather-Ford
Meanwhile in Asgard, it shows Baldr’s funeral, one of the saddest moments of Norse Mythology. Everyone and us content creators pay our condolences. Except for two hateful lesbian Valkyries in declaring they remain more beautiful and brighter than Baldr. This upsets the Asgardians/Homo Yggr, and pisses off/enrages (more on the latter than simply pissed) us as well, counting as a Moral Event Horizon in wishing them a fate worse than death. Afterwards, Sága and the Norns talk to Odin about this dark force besides Ragnarök, but Allfather remains dismissive. Then, Kriemhild frees and gets acquainted with Loki in amassing an army to wage war with Asgard (Oh, with a Game of Thrones song use the first time in your canon stories starting with this scene gives a great ominous feeling).
The Lokar is recruiting antagonistic beings from across the realms, these beings have their good reasons in proving why Asgard is arrogantly grandiose and pompous that clearly hurt the other realms. I am also reminded that when meeting powerful figures than himself, this version of Loki is shown to be more afraid out of respect than his YYGDM self. And of course Kriemhild brainwashes Mist (and no brainer, make fun of her being flat-chested). Asgard, especially Odin reflects themselves leading to the coming apocalypse and what comes after when they survive with new rulers. Then, Gullinbursti’s dead body and zombie jump scare before mercy killed gives a bloody warning.
Phila-Del-Phia!
15Allfather-FordMeanwhile in Asgard, it shows Baldr’s funeral, one of the saddest moments of Norse Mythology. Everyone and us content creators pay our condolences. Except for two hateful lesbian Valkyries in declaring they remain more beautiful and brighter than Baldr. This upsets the Asgardians/Homo Yggr, and pisses off/enrages (more on the latter than simply pissed) us as well, counting as a Moral Event Horizon in wishing them a fate worse than death. Afterwards, Sága and the Norns talk to Odin about this dark force besides Ragnarök, but Allfather remains dismissive. Then, Kriemhild frees and gets acquainted with Loki in amassing an army to wage war with Asgard (Oh, with a Game of Thrones song use the first time in your canon stories starting with this scene gives a great ominous feeling).
The Lokar is recruiting antagonistic beings from across the realms, these beings have their good reasons in proving why Asgard is arrogantly grandiose and pompous that clearly hurt the other realms. I am also reminded that when meeting powerful figures than himself, this version of Loki is shown to be more afraid out of respect than his YYGDM self. And of course Kriemhild brainwashes Mist (and no brainer, make fun of her being flat-chested). Asgard, especially Odin reflects themselves leading to the coming apocalypse and what comes after when they survive with new rulers. Then, Gullinbursti’s dead body and zombie jump scare before mercy killed gives a bloody warning.
Phila-Del-Phia!
7/1/2024 c62 Generic Reviewer
The zombie stuff is still as unnerving as it was in Urban Legends; same with the sex stuff (but in a good way). I do like how Akechi is quick to figure things out; makes me wonder if the Vamkyries will be handled a bit better than weird mini bosses with a messed up backstory.
Laters!
The zombie stuff is still as unnerving as it was in Urban Legends; same with the sex stuff (but in a good way). I do like how Akechi is quick to figure things out; makes me wonder if the Vamkyries will be handled a bit better than weird mini bosses with a messed up backstory.
Laters!
6/30/2024 c62 7Chaosblazer
that was intense and creepy at the same time
norse mythos is definitely something interesting, to be able to manipulate it to such degrees though dude it's insane.
yeah those deaths were indeed gruesome.
now i wonder what happens next, keep up the awesome work
7Chaosblazerthat was intense and creepy at the same time
norse mythos is definitely something interesting, to be able to manipulate it to such degrees though dude it's insane.
yeah those deaths were indeed gruesome.
now i wonder what happens next, keep up the awesome work
6/30/2024 c62 5Darth Necron
SO...once again mostly a sightly revised deja vu from Urban Legends other then stopping at Kriemhild...and a bit more of a pro active Akechi...not sure what this will lead to.
Anyway...not to shocking when a lot of the cast dies these days...this is Norse Game of Thrones after all...hell even seemed to happen with Disney's Acolyte to lol.
Anyway, seems like we got one more chunk of the angry yelling Valkyrie power hour then we will be back to the last haul...almost there.
5Darth NecronSO...once again mostly a sightly revised deja vu from Urban Legends other then stopping at Kriemhild...and a bit more of a pro active Akechi...not sure what this will lead to.
Anyway...not to shocking when a lot of the cast dies these days...this is Norse Game of Thrones after all...hell even seemed to happen with Disney's Acolyte to lol.
Anyway, seems like we got one more chunk of the angry yelling Valkyrie power hour then we will be back to the last haul...almost there.