
4/18 c17 Carol
I totally enjoyed your happy story. Well written
I totally enjoyed your happy story. Well written
4/18 c8 Carol
Love your story. Thank you for no Wickham’s.
Love your story. Thank you for no Wickham’s.
3/4 c17 NoName
This is such a lovely story.. the progress of their relationship, the sisterly bonds, Mrs Bennet are all perfect. 10/10 will read again.
I’m glad you skipped Mr Collin’s bit too but hopefully Charlotte still gets a good ending.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and sharing it.
This is such a lovely story.. the progress of their relationship, the sisterly bonds, Mrs Bennet are all perfect. 10/10 will read again.
I’m glad you skipped Mr Collin’s bit too but hopefully Charlotte still gets a good ending.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and sharing it.
11/10/2024 c11 Guest
There are many people who are good, kind, compassionate like Jane Bennet and there are a few people who are naive, foolish, like being the center of attention and making excuses for bad behavior, Jane Bennet
There are many people who are good, kind, compassionate like Jane Bennet and there are a few people who are naive, foolish, like being the center of attention and making excuses for bad behavior, Jane Bennet
11/9/2024 c2 Guest
The immature puppy Bingley is oblivious to Caroline's behaviours
The immature puppy Bingley is oblivious to Caroline's behaviours
5/19/2024 c7 Guest
Aunty Charlotte likes gossiping under the guise of friendship
Aunty Charlotte likes gossiping under the guise of friendship
5/19/2024 c5 Guest
Just a thought, I am curious to know what Elizabeth's definition of love is. In every story she wants to marry for love, even Jane, but what is her definition of love. I think with her arrogance and pride too, she is missing the definition of love and this is what many writers fail to see as well.
Just a thought, I am curious to know what Elizabeth's definition of love is. In every story she wants to marry for love, even Jane, but what is her definition of love. I think with her arrogance and pride too, she is missing the definition of love and this is what many writers fail to see as well.
5/14/2024 c1 Guest
Bingley was a poor friend to Darcy for failing to protect him against his mercenary sister.
Bingley was a poor friend to Darcy for failing to protect him against his mercenary sister.
4/28/2024 c12 Guest
Surprised that Caroline has not compromised Mr Darcy already noting her stalking of him. That he has been 'safe' from the ton with this lackadaisical attitude is laughable
Surprised that Caroline has not compromised Mr Darcy already noting her stalking of him. That he has been 'safe' from the ton with this lackadaisical attitude is laughable
4/28/2024 c17 Guest
Another excellent story but I feel Caroline went too far.
Another excellent story but I feel Caroline went too far.
4/26/2024 c16 Guest
The beginning was really slow and the end too fast.
If you cut down on Caroline's drama we could have had more of Darcy and Elizabeth
The beginning was really slow and the end too fast.
If you cut down on Caroline's drama we could have had more of Darcy and Elizabeth
4/26/2024 c7 Guest
Old lady Charlotte is annoying
Old lady Charlotte is annoying
4/26/2024 c6 Guest
Caroline Bingley is getting worse, and more devious
Caroline Bingley is getting worse, and more devious
4/12/2024 c5 bibliophilia1
I am so enjoying this! How delightfully realized they both are! And it is so much fun to read about them actually amusing and pleasing each other, rather than being angry at one another. Thanks for writing this!
I am so enjoying this! How delightfully realized they both are! And it is so much fun to read about them actually amusing and pleasing each other, rather than being angry at one another. Thanks for writing this!