for False King10/3/2020 c5 Mistletainn
The story's plotline felt quite rushed, and many scenes rather lacking in details. It's still pretty good for those who are familiar with F/SN and F/Z, though.
The story's plotline felt quite rushed, and many scenes rather lacking in details. It's still pretty good for those who are familiar with F/SN and F/Z, though.
10/1/2020 c5 Cobalt Conrad
The crack is as good as it is. Bruh, stop being serious and go FULL CRACK. Snort a little and you'll do way better than trying to keep the serious tone of 4th grail war. The story is WAY off course as it is.
The crack is as good as it is. Bruh, stop being serious and go FULL CRACK. Snort a little and you'll do way better than trying to keep the serious tone of 4th grail war. The story is WAY off course as it is.
9/28/2020 c5 sawtooth44
not the typical story i read... since this story is very short and feels just about done in 1 or 2 chapters
its short, sweet and shows the power of knowing roughly what's going to happen
i personally like big storys with 20k words in them but having something different is good every now and then
not the typical story i read... since this story is very short and feels just about done in 1 or 2 chapters
its short, sweet and shows the power of knowing roughly what's going to happen
i personally like big storys with 20k words in them but having something different is good every now and then
9/27/2020 c4 uzumaki.namikaze10
B in Endurance. And Kiritaugu called it medicore? B means he has 80 times the endurance. Even more than Berserk-fcking Heracles
B in Endurance. And Kiritaugu called it medicore? B means he has 80 times the endurance. Even more than Berserk-fcking Heracles
9/26/2020 c5 
1Hainz Leonard Kim
Yayayayayayyah, I love it though I must ask if you will be making a Saber Shirou in Chaldea? It just sounds fun. Arthuria reacting to Avalon in shirou, Archer Emiya reacting to a non counter Guardian version of himself, Also Illya kuro and Miyu seeing a less serious version of they’re Shirou counterpart, also the other servants.
Just imagine A cook off of Saber shirou and Archer shirou, just imagine who would win in the battle of wills(tasty food)
1Hainz Leonard KimYayayayayayyah, I love it though I must ask if you will be making a Saber Shirou in Chaldea? It just sounds fun. Arthuria reacting to Avalon in shirou, Archer Emiya reacting to a non counter Guardian version of himself, Also Illya kuro and Miyu seeing a less serious version of they’re Shirou counterpart, also the other servants.
Just imagine A cook off of Saber shirou and Archer shirou, just imagine who would win in the battle of wills(tasty food)
9/26/2020 c5 Phoenix
Oh gosh this is great. Sabre just BS Archer and Archer totally bought it. thanks for the update and I can't wait to read where this goes
Oh gosh this is great. Sabre just BS Archer and Archer totally bought it. thanks for the update and I can't wait to read where this goes