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18BlackDragonDevilGod
Okay, as much as i think Weiss did deserve to be punished, what Ruby almost did was going WAY too far. Thank god Neo was there to help keep Ruby's head on straight. Still something needs to be soon before the darkness consuming Ruby gets her completely
18BlackDragonDevilGodOkay, as much as i think Weiss did deserve to be punished, what Ruby almost did was going WAY too far. Thank god Neo was there to help keep Ruby's head on straight. Still something needs to be soon before the darkness consuming Ruby gets her completely
4/30/2020 c5 Guest
Great story so far man keep it up
Great story so far man keep it up
4/17/2020 c5 258GrimGrave
I love the fact that Coco had to let it be known Ruby was hot.
The truth is slowly coming together. Interesting to see Qrow so chill about the situation. You'd think he would be worried to death about Ruby, but perhaps he's just too aware of what his niece can do. Good thing he destroyed her drugs though, but I dare say she can easily get more. Loved the titbit about Summer.
258GrimGraveI love the fact that Coco had to let it be known Ruby was hot.
The truth is slowly coming together. Interesting to see Qrow so chill about the situation. You'd think he would be worried to death about Ruby, but perhaps he's just too aware of what his niece can do. Good thing he destroyed her drugs though, but I dare say she can easily get more. Loved the titbit about Summer.
4/16/2020 c5 KHARAKI TAKAN
That was a neat song. That rap was good as well.
Woo Qrow. Good to see he destroyed her drugs though.
Good chapter.
That was a neat song. That rap was good as well.
Woo Qrow. Good to see he destroyed her drugs though.
Good chapter.
4/16/2020 c5 TheBoxGhost117
This is an interesting take on the "Ruby gets kicked out of Beacon" angle, and i can't wait to see more of her backstory and plans but the song lyrics are kind of out of place with how long they are.
This is an interesting take on the "Ruby gets kicked out of Beacon" angle, and i can't wait to see more of her backstory and plans but the song lyrics are kind of out of place with how long they are.
4/8/2020 c4 KHARAKI TAKAN
Was good to see Tyrian and Hazel though.
I wonder who Adrian's father is. Is there any of Ruby in Adrian? Was not expecting Ruby to be Adrian's mother here though.
Damn I feel bad for Neo.
Good chapter.
Was good to see Tyrian and Hazel though.
I wonder who Adrian's father is. Is there any of Ruby in Adrian? Was not expecting Ruby to be Adrian's mother here though.
Damn I feel bad for Neo.
Good chapter.
4/7/2020 c4 Guest
From warm rosy red to cold pitch black.
From warm rosy red to cold pitch black.
4/7/2020 c4 Guest
Wait? Can used wind without dust, flaming silver eyes, told yang the she a branwen tribe reject. I'm calling it, Ruby has the spring maiden powers and I don't think yang will like the news about her mother.
Wait? Can used wind without dust, flaming silver eyes, told yang the she a branwen tribe reject. I'm calling it, Ruby has the spring maiden powers and I don't think yang will like the news about her mother.
4/7/2020 c4 YuukiAsuna-Chan
You know, this would be much better if Ruby wasn't emotionally unstable bitch. You would think she would have better control, seriously how did she rise to where she is when she is with so little control over herself?
Why are Salem's pieces hanging with Ruby?
Also, the kid feels like it was added just for hell of it.
You know, this would be much better if Ruby wasn't emotionally unstable bitch. You would think she would have better control, seriously how did she rise to where she is when she is with so little control over herself?
Why are Salem's pieces hanging with Ruby?
Also, the kid feels like it was added just for hell of it.
4/7/2020 c4 Guest
Oh ****! Ruby had a child!? I did not see that coming.
Oh ****! Ruby had a child!? I did not see that coming.
4/4/2020 c2 258GrimGrave
So, the irony of my previous comment mentioning small errors while misspelling "first off" made me chuckle.
Now, you keep mixing up "you're" and your" and sometimes "Vale" and "Remnant" are not capitalized.
Same with "their" and "they're." Some words like "makeshift" is split into two words when they're not supposed to, same with "without."
Velvet working for Ruby was a surprise, but I like it. Glad to see that Ruby has some friends at least, though I don't know if this extends to the rest of team CFVY.
I do have a slight gripe with Yang, Weiss, and Blake asking Ruby to come back to be their teamleader though; that's a pretty bold request after having turned their backs on her and not even visiting her when she was in prison, but my concern is that people spend 4 years in Huntsmen academies(17-21) and Ruby spent to my understanding 3 years in prison after having already been at the academy closer to 1 year. Her team should've graduated by now unless they're either have like 6 months left OR they've been held back for lacking a member and still have 3 years left. Team CFVY are second years so they have definitely graduated and thus Ruby's influence wouldn't have included them during their stay at Beacon.
Unless I've misunderstood something.
Either way, I do enjoy fics like these with Ruby gone rogue. Keep writing and practice, maybe get a proofreader, and things will work out!
258GrimGraveSo, the irony of my previous comment mentioning small errors while misspelling "first off" made me chuckle.
Now, you keep mixing up "you're" and your" and sometimes "Vale" and "Remnant" are not capitalized.
Same with "their" and "they're." Some words like "makeshift" is split into two words when they're not supposed to, same with "without."
Velvet working for Ruby was a surprise, but I like it. Glad to see that Ruby has some friends at least, though I don't know if this extends to the rest of team CFVY.
I do have a slight gripe with Yang, Weiss, and Blake asking Ruby to come back to be their teamleader though; that's a pretty bold request after having turned their backs on her and not even visiting her when she was in prison, but my concern is that people spend 4 years in Huntsmen academies(17-21) and Ruby spent to my understanding 3 years in prison after having already been at the academy closer to 1 year. Her team should've graduated by now unless they're either have like 6 months left OR they've been held back for lacking a member and still have 3 years left. Team CFVY are second years so they have definitely graduated and thus Ruby's influence wouldn't have included them during their stay at Beacon.
Unless I've misunderstood something.
Either way, I do enjoy fics like these with Ruby gone rogue. Keep writing and practice, maybe get a proofreader, and things will work out!