for A Rose Blooms Anew4/4/2020 c2 Beloved Nightmare Union
Awesome story, I love these betrayal types! I especially love how you wrote ruby in this one. After all she had to endure, this new persona fits her perfectly.
I can't wait for the next update, I hope we see more of Wby and the others reaction and thoughts of the new ruby.
Awesome story, I love these betrayal types! I especially love how you wrote ruby in this one. After all she had to endure, this new persona fits her perfectly.
I can't wait for the next update, I hope we see more of Wby and the others reaction and thoughts of the new ruby.
4/3/2020 c1 
5PissDiarrheaFromMyAsshole
You know this fic is going to be a rollercoaster when the first word is misspelled.
5PissDiarrheaFromMyAssholeYou know this fic is going to be a rollercoaster when the first word is misspelled.
4/2/2020 c1 258GrimGrave
So, firt oss, there are a good handful of smaller errors, but it happens to the best of us. (Like "we're putting you back in you're hole" should be "your* hole")
Anywho, I see potential here. I like the premise and while I would've loved to see a bit more fleshed out beginning and Ruby's actual shift in demeanour, this was good.
I do feel sorry for Neo, but I'm sure Ruby will come around. Good job, mate!
258GrimGraveSo, firt oss, there are a good handful of smaller errors, but it happens to the best of us. (Like "we're putting you back in you're hole" should be "your* hole")
Anywho, I see potential here. I like the premise and while I would've loved to see a bit more fleshed out beginning and Ruby's actual shift in demeanour, this was good.
I do feel sorry for Neo, but I'm sure Ruby will come around. Good job, mate!
4/1/2020 c1 GuardianNexus89
Interesting idea just one thing though what's with all the p at the beginning of each line?
Interesting idea just one thing though what's with all the p at the beginning of each line?