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11/14/2020 c1 CRYNIGHT
you have good writing skills. you failed to deliver a compelling story between the characters however. it was an ok read but the story left me wanting something more. not by any means bashing you. just want to encourage you to push your skills in the right direction. you should have added a revenge story from asuka at the end to tie up the loose ends. make it so they end up in some emotional fueled situation, doesn't need to be romantic, just dramatic, like they always are

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