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4/14/2022 c15 johnzeckleston
This MC is dunb as hell, creating a shield of Ice against Endeavour’s hell fire didn’t work and she thinks it will somehow stop All Might’s Smash. Just create a shield of PoD and call it a day, the MC is trolling. She has so many powers but keeps just using Ice and not even the ultimate moves like absolute zero….
4/14/2022 c13 johnzeckleston
MC almost (DID) got smoked by a non-prime AFO after having hax powers and c in DxD verse lol, MC shouldn’t be testing her Luck against All Might anytime soon without maxing out some dungeon training.
4/14/2022 c12 johnzeckleston
If the MC just fully masters PoD she would have little to no problems with OFA and the fight with AFO would’ve been a breeze, literally transform your body into PoD to negate 99.9% of attacks and any time you punch them they are erased.
4/14/2022 c9 johnzeckleston
You missed to perfect opportunity to train Izuku into such a great Villain that he would kill Bakugo himself( after some healthy trash talk).

Eri’s rewind quirk, OFA/AFO, Permeation, Creation, Erasure’s quirk, Warp Gate quirk and Decay are a must. So many good quirks to take. Even the black hole quirk is ridiculous, it’s basically PoD with attraction.
4/14/2022 c8 johnzeckleston
Wow transfering to MHA for the 2nd world was a masterful choice, liking it so far. It’s like an all you can eat for free buffet in this verse for the MC, can’t wait for her to get AFO/OFA and some other interesting quirks along the way.
4/14/2022 c3 johnzeckleston
Plz none of this Gender bending nonsense. Also you have given ice magic too much variety, bring able to summon ice knights and it being unlocked so early os ridiuclous, maybe it would make more sense when she unlocked another skill line a merged the abilities.

I can’t remember if this is that story where Sirchez gets gender bent… hopefully not.

Anyway looking forward to MC stealing PoD.
4/12/2022 c6 TrumpasaurusRex
I laughed pretty hard at your evil laughter after killing Rias.
4/10/2022 c5 roblester00
Black Barrel from FATE soon umu umu
4/10/2022 c5 roblester00
YES THE SWORDBEAMS! THE THING THAT MAKES SABER, A SABER
4/10/2022 c4 roblester00
SEIBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
4/10/2022 c3 roblester00
hmmm nuns, me being introduced to sessyoin kiara because of fgo made nuns a bit creepier than normal
3/24/2022 c6 God of Anime
this is probaly the only gamer fanfiction that i always read since it is so good. I wish there were way more chapters.
3/24/2022 c16 1ZeroSpearow
pro tip, read this chapters while listening to Frozen movie, while everyone is being massacred, LET IT GOO, LET IT GOOO, kkkkk
read one of your fics, and i am reading this one now, good shit
2/19/2022 c32 2ossabellator
Earlier I thought she was too arrogant. Good to see the character changes from getting easily angered to planning and actually feeling something. Good job author.
2/15/2022 c14 ossabellator
The MC is way to arrogant and her acting is disgusting. I mean if she was doing it to survive then it would make sense like the MC in World's apocalypse online but without the gamer system, she wouldn't be able. to get far. If she had no future knowledge, then she probably wouldn't even be able. to survive.
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