for The Value of a Wave8/2/2020 c3 
42Mako-clb
I love Nami, so it's nice to see you do, too. However, while I think the crew might groan and complain, I don't really think any of them, and especially Sanji, would doubt Nami's word when it comes to a storm. They've seen what she can do, and tired or not they would believe here.
On the other hand, the situation makes for a fun speech by Luffy. And to be honest, I've always felt like Nami is the one in charge of most day-to-day things on the ship.
42Mako-clbI love Nami, so it's nice to see you do, too. However, while I think the crew might groan and complain, I don't really think any of them, and especially Sanji, would doubt Nami's word when it comes to a storm. They've seen what she can do, and tired or not they would believe here.
On the other hand, the situation makes for a fun speech by Luffy. And to be honest, I've always felt like Nami is the one in charge of most day-to-day things on the ship.
4/29/2020 c6 10Allosaurus.Jei
Bah... I read all of them and they're so cute god hecking dammit.
Also unromantic which is perfect for this pair because their romance is with adventure not each other.
Frick they're too damn perfect and you didn't even have to stray into ooc-ness.
That last bit with the baby.
"I want one."
"Leave that until you're Pirate King, captain."
"Yeah I know that much."
Gah! They even sound like an aromantic married couple.
10Allosaurus.JeiBah... I read all of them and they're so cute god hecking dammit.
Also unromantic which is perfect for this pair because their romance is with adventure not each other.
Frick they're too damn perfect and you didn't even have to stray into ooc-ness.
That last bit with the baby.
"I want one."
"Leave that until you're Pirate King, captain."
"Yeah I know that much."
Gah! They even sound like an aromantic married couple.
4/14/2020 c6 SweetAngel91
Really nice to read. A lot of fluff but it wasn't overwhelmingly corny either. And as a LuNa fan I imagine romance even if it wasn't intended :P Thank you for these refreshing pieces ! Keep on the good work
Really nice to read. A lot of fluff but it wasn't overwhelmingly corny either. And as a LuNa fan I imagine romance even if it wasn't intended :P Thank you for these refreshing pieces ! Keep on the good work
4/7/2020 c6 42Mako-clb
I hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. Sometimes it's best to show what's going on instead of telling. For example, instead of straight out saying a character feels a certain way, you can hint at it by the look on their face or the way they move. It makes the reader feel more like they are watching the story instead of being told the story.
Also, I do think Nami would be great with babies. She really does like children.
42Mako-clbI hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. Sometimes it's best to show what's going on instead of telling. For example, instead of straight out saying a character feels a certain way, you can hint at it by the look on their face or the way they move. It makes the reader feel more like they are watching the story instead of being told the story.
Also, I do think Nami would be great with babies. She really does like children.
4/5/2020 c6 Turquoise-Starlight-Wolf
Um, don’t usually do reviews, but I had to let ya know this a great story! I loved the way it was in-depth. And Happy Birthday!
Um, don’t usually do reviews, but I had to let ya know this a great story! I loved the way it was in-depth. And Happy Birthday!