
4/7/2021 c1 0-0
Ohayo, i came from your AO3 acc, i really like your fics!
Ohayo, i came from your AO3 acc, i really like your fics!
4/8/2020 c2 Latezz123
I can’t get over the fact that your version of Temari has dark skin (or tan, as you have put it), and is suicidal. But I’ll still keep reading it though. I’m waiting for Shikamaru, and looking foward to their reunion. Keep it coming!
I can’t get over the fact that your version of Temari has dark skin (or tan, as you have put it), and is suicidal. But I’ll still keep reading it though. I’m waiting for Shikamaru, and looking foward to their reunion. Keep it coming!
4/7/2020 c1
30fanofthisfiction
What an amazingly calm baby Temari's is but what a very tragic way to come into the world...to be loved by a Godmother, and yet to be born with a Mom who may die. Thanks for sharing!

What an amazingly calm baby Temari's is but what a very tragic way to come into the world...to be loved by a Godmother, and yet to be born with a Mom who may die. Thanks for sharing!
4/7/2020 c2
2Temaridono
Temari and Shikamaru separated with a child who doesn't even know what they have hurt me a little. I've always thought that the pairings were perhaps not so "romantic" and "ideal". Maybe there was quite a bit of drama. A live Neji is great and even more so if he's with Tenten. I like this story!

Temari and Shikamaru separated with a child who doesn't even know what they have hurt me a little. I've always thought that the pairings were perhaps not so "romantic" and "ideal". Maybe there was quite a bit of drama. A live Neji is great and even more so if he's with Tenten. I like this story!
4/6/2020 c1 holynanolli
OH ive been reading this on ao3! will you be posting it all here as well? it's just so much convenient reading here for me. haha
anyway i love this! this storyline is so unique
OH ive been reading this on ao3! will you be posting it all here as well? it's just so much convenient reading here for me. haha
anyway i love this! this storyline is so unique
4/5/2020 c1 Ten
Wow wasn't expecting that. I can't wait to see what happens. Great first chapter!
Wow wasn't expecting that. I can't wait to see what happens. Great first chapter!