for What Happens When You Summon Emiya Shirou in Chaldea4/5 c147 luc1d0
One of the best Fate fanfics I’ve read so far. Really sucks that it had such an abrupt ending. I started losing interest in the later chapters once the OC character was introduced. Honestly, with all the OP Servants already in the story, I don’t think the OC was really necessary.
There were so many cool directions you could’ve taken like adding more Servants from the Fate universe, bringing in more Tsukihime characters, or even doing a fun crossover with other animes like Dragon Ball, One Piece, and so on. The story definitely had a lot of potential.
But regardless, this fanfic was amazing. I was super hooked and had a blast binge reading it whenever I was bored at work. Wishing you all the best!
One of the best Fate fanfics I’ve read so far. Really sucks that it had such an abrupt ending. I started losing interest in the later chapters once the OC character was introduced. Honestly, with all the OP Servants already in the story, I don’t think the OC was really necessary.
There were so many cool directions you could’ve taken like adding more Servants from the Fate universe, bringing in more Tsukihime characters, or even doing a fun crossover with other animes like Dragon Ball, One Piece, and so on. The story definitely had a lot of potential.
But regardless, this fanfic was amazing. I was super hooked and had a blast binge reading it whenever I was bored at work. Wishing you all the best!
3/6 c73 Guest
You would have sent it to Smash Bros
You would have sent it to Smash Bros
2/6 c108 
42BeDamned
Hans I will erase you from existence, how dare you ruin the story that is the Saber route by turning it into an isekai of all things!
42BeDamnedHans I will erase you from existence, how dare you ruin the story that is the Saber route by turning it into an isekai of all things!
2/6 c147 finalfool
There is a simple way, that you could fix this story. Write one more chapter, where you send this new son of Emiya, back to his real timeline. That way, you could get back on track with this story.
There is a simple way, that you could fix this story. Write one more chapter, where you send this new son of Emiya, back to his real timeline. That way, you could get back on track with this story.
12/14/2024 c147 kingjoshuaegwuaka
No man, please don't end this story is good. But it's your opinion and I respect you.
No man, please don't end this story is good. But it's your opinion and I respect you.
12/10/2024 c147 Briecee
It's a darn shame that this fic is coming to an end, I have greatly enjoyed this fic time to time to see the hijinks going on in Chaldea. I also see how with the swapping of main characters and introducing new ones, the story quickly got out of hand.
On the other hand, I can't help but think that the story could still have been worked with the Kenzaki chapters, as it is one of the effects of Shirou being summoned in Chaldea, as well as labelling some of the chapters as interludes rather than being integral parts of the main story.
In any case, I look forward to seeing the rewrite, and wish you the best with your future fics!
It's a darn shame that this fic is coming to an end, I have greatly enjoyed this fic time to time to see the hijinks going on in Chaldea. I also see how with the swapping of main characters and introducing new ones, the story quickly got out of hand.
On the other hand, I can't help but think that the story could still have been worked with the Kenzaki chapters, as it is one of the effects of Shirou being summoned in Chaldea, as well as labelling some of the chapters as interludes rather than being integral parts of the main story.
In any case, I look forward to seeing the rewrite, and wish you the best with your future fics!
12/10/2024 c17 Jareth Arian
Archer Lily Kid Gilgamesh is the Kid, as he's Childish and Mischievous in an Amusing and Tolerable Way.
Archer Gilgamesh is the Teen, as he's Rebellious and Arrogant to the Point that he's a Headache.
Caster Gilgamesh is the Adult, as he's Responsible and Hardworking to the point that it's Worrisome to his Health.
Archer Lily Kid Gilgamesh is the Kid, as he's Childish and Mischievous in an Amusing and Tolerable Way.
Archer Gilgamesh is the Teen, as he's Rebellious and Arrogant to the Point that he's a Headache.
Caster Gilgamesh is the Adult, as he's Responsible and Hardworking to the point that it's Worrisome to his Health.
12/9/2024 c1 Jareth Arian
I just remember something as I Re-Read this. Ritsuka "Gudao" Fujimaru and Charlemagne aka Charles the Great aka King of the Paladins looks the same, to the point that someone actually made a Fanfic where Mashu is the Master of the Saber Class Demi-Servant Ritsuka "Charles" Fujimaru as Ritsuka Fujimaru is the Master of the Shielder Class Demi-Servant Matthew "Mash" Kyrielight.
If you plan to do a Rewrite, at least sement Mash and Ritsuka's Relationship via making them the Master of the other, for the fun of it.
I just remember something as I Re-Read this. Ritsuka "Gudao" Fujimaru and Charlemagne aka Charles the Great aka King of the Paladins looks the same, to the point that someone actually made a Fanfic where Mashu is the Master of the Saber Class Demi-Servant Ritsuka "Charles" Fujimaru as Ritsuka Fujimaru is the Master of the Shielder Class Demi-Servant Matthew "Mash" Kyrielight.
If you plan to do a Rewrite, at least sement Mash and Ritsuka's Relationship via making them the Master of the other, for the fun of it.
12/5/2024 c147 jacrispy109
Sorry man I enjoyed your fanfics and always looked forward to more of your storys
Sorry man I enjoyed your fanfics and always looked forward to more of your storys
12/5/2024 c147 Midnight49
No problem with a rewrite, just update this story to let the readers know that the rewrite is up and going.
No problem with a rewrite, just update this story to let the readers know that the rewrite is up and going.
12/5/2024 c147 ranandrakemal
It's sad that this story is discontinued, but tbh, when Kenzaki is introduced, I'm still reading it like normal. But when you make it that Kenzaki appeared more than Shirou, I straight out skip the entire chapter and hope you make it Shirou appear more again, and you didn't do it.
It's sad that this story is discontinued, but tbh, when Kenzaki is introduced, I'm still reading it like normal. But when you make it that Kenzaki appeared more than Shirou, I straight out skip the entire chapter and hope you make it Shirou appear more again, and you didn't do it.