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8/29/2020 c1 11ItsNotMyBirthday
A good retrospective of Eliot. I like that he's feeling things in spite of himself.
5/5/2020 c1 30cosette141
Aw this was really well written!
4/15/2020 c1 10HonestBee
Very nice. This seems true to the characters though a little different from what I'd expect, but not in a bad way. I liked Eliot's perceptions of the other team members, and his unspoken understanding with Parker. The only thing that bugs me, and it's only a formatting note, is the hyphen you have at the beginning of every paragraph. Otherwise, I enjoyed this.

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