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5/5 c1 24cosette141
Aw this was really well written!
4/15 c1 10HonestBee
Very nice. This seems true to the characters though a little different from what I'd expect, but not in a bad way. I liked Eliot's perceptions of the other team members, and his unspoken understanding with Parker. The only thing that bugs me, and it's only a formatting note, is the hyphen you have at the beginning of every paragraph. Otherwise, I enjoyed this.

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