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5/15 c1 3JeffTheRock
Hello, I just want to say that I like this story, I like how you put thoughts on your protagonistsome stuff you need to address though, it would be best if you follow consistency in the tenses, like most parts were past tense, but there were some passages that are present tense. With that said, the whole story should have been in past tense. Cheers to you!

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