for Fallen Angel11/6/2023 c1 Guest
I’m wirting a review because you have 4,999… 5K sounds much better :P
I’m wirting a review because you have 4,999… 5K sounds much better :P
10/30/2023 c1 Guest
You story wasnt so bad.
The first few chapters were pretty awesome, but you ight get backlash for how Edward behaves later. Despite how he changes, we still do not see Jacob and leah again as far as I remember. Which is pretty bad given how they took care of Bella.
You might want to ease up on his controlling behaviour more than you did already in the ff.
Am not saying this to be mean about your story or to you. Its just that twifics already got a bad rep because of 50 shades.
Anyway, happy publishing.
You story wasnt so bad.
The first few chapters were pretty awesome, but you ight get backlash for how Edward behaves later. Despite how he changes, we still do not see Jacob and leah again as far as I remember. Which is pretty bad given how they took care of Bella.
You might want to ease up on his controlling behaviour more than you did already in the ff.
Am not saying this to be mean about your story or to you. Its just that twifics already got a bad rep because of 50 shades.
Anyway, happy publishing.
10/3/2023 c51 kneon
Great story. Loved everything about. Can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing. Good luck on the publishing
Great story. Loved everything about. Can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing. Good luck on the publishing
10/2/2023 c2 AvaG
She is pretty down on herself.
Edward is behaving weird.
Glad Charlie is doing ok.
Forgot to hit post review yesterday.
She is pretty down on herself.
Edward is behaving weird.
Glad Charlie is doing ok.
Forgot to hit post review yesterday.
10/1/2023 c1 AvaG
Wow. I forgot how Bella lived. A homebody without a real way out. And a huge crush left over from high-school on a guy who never acknowledged her.
Love it.
Wow. I forgot how Bella lived. A homebody without a real way out. And a huge crush left over from high-school on a guy who never acknowledged her.
Love it.
9/23/2023 c51 marigold123
I enjoyed reading your story. I loved seeing how Bella became such a strong woman and changed Edward’s life. Thank you for writing.
I enjoyed reading your story. I loved seeing how Bella became such a strong woman and changed Edward’s life. Thank you for writing.