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6/8/2022 c37 ita123
I'm sorry, but this is one of the worst stories I've read here. but thanks for sharing this story with us
5/29/2022 c1 Guest
Sounds similar a certain idiot who wishes to be 'The Eminence in the Shadows', chasing after a fantasy idea with extreme fanaticism. At least this guy didn't whack his head on a tree until he thought a truck's headlight was a mystical encounter that would lead him to the secret of learning magic.
5/24/2022 c15 Guest
Lol wow you actually think Izuku could beat or match 8th gate guy? He'd hit his ass beat lol. No way, the characters in Naruto would EASILY trounce pretty much anyone in the MHA verse through sheer versatility and ACTUAL combat and espionage training. Your a fucking idiot
5/10/2022 c7 moontheir4
Uh, ok. Not to sound discouraging but that was kinda terrible. "I'm going to read off a wiki page about what I can do, you should all just take me at my word, even for the shit I've obviously never done and have no means of knowing about without out of context knowledge. And yeah, anyone can learn this. Well, except for Izuku, the only person I've actually tried to teach. But trust me, anyone can do this list of fantastical things I've 'theorized' about. No, believing me about all of these absurd claims I'm making with no proof doesn't make you all look like idiots." Seriously, I cringed so hard I think I pulled a muscle.
5/10/2022 c3 moontheir4
Pity he focused on chakra combat magic instead of ninshu... which would have let him grant chakra to his brother and excised all this angst.
4/22/2022 c7 brandonmunoz499
Nah dont teach anyone thats not the live interest chakra
4/22/2022 c5 brandonmunoz499
Stop crying
4/22/2022 c37 brandonmunoz499
Whoever the love interest is has to be strong
4/22/2022 c37 brandonmunoz499
Whos the pairing?
4/22/2022 c37 LadyFreya99
I was wishing for madara x melissa but oh well. What is madaras pairing anyways?
4/19/2022 c9 vbmenzel
Sounda like Itachi
3/30/2022 c15 5blackcharizard762
8th gate Guy moved so fast he bent space, not a chance Izuku ever gets close to that. Though I definitely agree All Might is a match for at least the 6th gate if not the seventh. 8th gate Guy is 100x stronger than base Guy.
3/30/2022 c14 blackcharizard762
You know plasma is stupid hot right? Like 6000 degrees Celsius, the sheer heat alone would do damage.
3/30/2022 c5 blackcharizard762
He's progressing a little fast isn't he? It took Naruto I think most of a week to learn wind release and that was with way more clones and on top of that he could maintain those clones longer than Madara. If he keeps going at this rate he's going to run out of shit to learn as the story progresses.
3/29/2022 c3 1imjusttryingthings
About the chakra reserves, it's kinda to be expected for him to have large amounts since he is a reincarnator. As stated earlier, total chakra is a combination of Yang(physical energy) and Yin(mental energy). Without even mentioning that he is supposed to be a once a generation type of genius, he would still have a large chakra reserve simply because of the memories of his previous life.

Your punctuation was fine this chspter until it got to the conversation, then you seem to suddenly forget that sentences are supposed to end with a period.

Also, could maybe use a line break when transitioning from first pov to third, just so it looks better and not to confuse some people.
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