for Interplanetary Love1/18/2022 c5 Haseo55
I think the story could have been better. It felt really rushed I wanted to feel invested in the relation with Jaune and Momo, and I really want to see a story about that see it grow with both Rito and RWBYP not realizing what they lost till too late.
Pyrrha getting into the relationship at the end was something I really didn't like and well since is the most dominant ship for them I'm kinda tired and tend to evade them.
The story itself felt to rushed and I feel it should have been only about the characters and not have the entire of it be about a battle.
Sorry, I don't intend to have it be a flame but constructive criticism. There are alt of ways to use the Jaune x Momo, like him getting expelled and Momo coming to his life while he is staying with his sister and just have it go like two normal teens.
I think the story could have been better. It felt really rushed I wanted to feel invested in the relation with Jaune and Momo, and I really want to see a story about that see it grow with both Rito and RWBYP not realizing what they lost till too late.
Pyrrha getting into the relationship at the end was something I really didn't like and well since is the most dominant ship for them I'm kinda tired and tend to evade them.
The story itself felt to rushed and I feel it should have been only about the characters and not have the entire of it be about a battle.
Sorry, I don't intend to have it be a flame but constructive criticism. There are alt of ways to use the Jaune x Momo, like him getting expelled and Momo coming to his life while he is staying with his sister and just have it go like two normal teens.
11/5/2020 c1 PositiveReader
Again just ignore all the rude comments also this is a great and I mean a great pairing this looks promising
Again just ignore all the rude comments also this is a great and I mean a great pairing this looks promising
6/18/2020 c5 Guest
God this was cringey and lazy as all hell, also this last chapter just felt like an all around Pyrrha dick sucking contest.
God this was cringey and lazy as all hell, also this last chapter just felt like an all around Pyrrha dick sucking contest.
6/20/2020 c1 Haseo55
I wanted to see a RWBY X To love ru yet this is not what I had in mind.
One idea I had was him getting expelled and getting the hate of vale thus he stayed with Saphron only to have Lala or Momo show up in his bath.
Now Jaune is the only person keeping remenant alive as if he messes up the relation Gid will blow the planet.
And yes all Remnant knows.
I wanted to see a RWBY X To love ru yet this is not what I had in mind.
One idea I had was him getting expelled and getting the hate of vale thus he stayed with Saphron only to have Lala or Momo show up in his bath.
Now Jaune is the only person keeping remenant alive as if he messes up the relation Gid will blow the planet.
And yes all Remnant knows.
5/29/2020 c5 
30The-Prodigious-One
X3runner hey I just fixed it thank you for bringing it to my attention I was kinda sleepy when I put the finishing touches on this chapter before I posted it here on Fanfiction as well as on my Wattpad profile so good job
30The-Prodigious-OneX3runner hey I just fixed it thank you for bringing it to my attention I was kinda sleepy when I put the finishing touches on this chapter before I posted it here on Fanfiction as well as on my Wattpad profile so good job
5/4/2020 c1 Guest
Why Jaune
Why Jaune
4/23/2020 c2 Vercingetorix Rex
author, could you do me a favor and delete the first guest review?
if this guest has a problem, he only has to create an account and chat by private message! lol
I like Rito and Lala? and what? I don't see where's the harm?
first, avoid responding in the review section, do them by mp or in an author note.
if I read, it is because i am interested in the crossover To Love Ru AND Rwby!
I'm not saying I didn't like it but it could have been written better.
On second thought, I wonder if it wouldn't have been better to do something the opposite, namely Momo for a reason X or Y like Lala using a defective invention, ending up in Remnant and meeting Jaune?
author, could you do me a favor and delete the first guest review?
if this guest has a problem, he only has to create an account and chat by private message! lol
I like Rito and Lala? and what? I don't see where's the harm?
first, avoid responding in the review section, do them by mp or in an author note.
if I read, it is because i am interested in the crossover To Love Ru AND Rwby!
I'm not saying I didn't like it but it could have been written better.
On second thought, I wonder if it wouldn't have been better to do something the opposite, namely Momo for a reason X or Y like Lala using a defective invention, ending up in Remnant and meeting Jaune?
4/19/2020 c1 Reader
Its OK
Its OK
4/18/2020 c2 Guest
Jaune : Eh he I was scrawny and weak at the start but Pyrrha helped me.
Am I really the only one who finds it really fucking dumb, that apparently what most people think, is that Jaune just lazed around all his life without doing any kind of workout, even though he always wanted to be a huntsman, but then one day just went. "Right I guess I'm going to Beacon now." Sorry but to me, that seems stupid, not training is one thing, but him not at the very least trying to be fitter is a whole other thing.
Jaune : Eh he I was scrawny and weak at the start but Pyrrha helped me.
Am I really the only one who finds it really fucking dumb, that apparently what most people think, is that Jaune just lazed around all his life without doing any kind of workout, even though he always wanted to be a huntsman, but then one day just went. "Right I guess I'm going to Beacon now." Sorry but to me, that seems stupid, not training is one thing, but him not at the very least trying to be fitter is a whole other thing.
4/15/2020 c1 Guest
Ignore Angron/Flo/Louise XIII, I mean, the way you wrote the dialogue is bad and reads like a script, but he tends to do the same with every story that doesn't have Rito as a MC.
And unironically, the only why he follows this story is because you mentioned Rito and Lala is with him.
Ignore Angron/Flo/Louise XIII, I mean, the way you wrote the dialogue is bad and reads like a script, but he tends to do the same with every story that doesn't have Rito as a MC.
And unironically, the only why he follows this story is because you mentioned Rito and Lala is with him.
4/15/2020 c1 The-Prodigious-One
Mr Angron Okay you are entitled to your opinion but I want to know if it's so fairly average to you(meaning you didn't like it) why did you give it a favorite and a follow when you're probably not going to read the rest of the fic when it comes out(once again because you did not like the first chapter) as for the girls that were jealous well Pyrrha is wholly in love with Jaune to begin with and team RWBY have fallen for him by now in this fic(since anything is possible in fanfictions) and thus Pyrrha and team RWBY were jealous of Momo being able to be so bold as to flirt openly with Jaune causing them all to be uncomfortable with the situation... Also man look I accidentally deleted the original version of the first chapter which I wrote on Wattpad so I had to rewrite the chapter on Wattpad again while only remembering bits and pieces of the original version so this one is quite little weaker than the original... Thank you for your review anyway tho enjoy your night
Mr Angron Okay you are entitled to your opinion but I want to know if it's so fairly average to you(meaning you didn't like it) why did you give it a favorite and a follow when you're probably not going to read the rest of the fic when it comes out(once again because you did not like the first chapter) as for the girls that were jealous well Pyrrha is wholly in love with Jaune to begin with and team RWBY have fallen for him by now in this fic(since anything is possible in fanfictions) and thus Pyrrha and team RWBY were jealous of Momo being able to be so bold as to flirt openly with Jaune causing them all to be uncomfortable with the situation... Also man look I accidentally deleted the original version of the first chapter which I wrote on Wattpad so I had to rewrite the chapter on Wattpad again while only remembering bits and pieces of the original version so this one is quite little weaker than the original... Thank you for your review anyway tho enjoy your night
4/15/2020 c1 The-Prodigious-One
X3Runner nope only Jaune is getting a girl here only one tho plus an extra "What If" part of the very last chapter where Momo and Pyrrha have a triple relationship with Jaune as an alternate"extra" ending
X3Runner nope only Jaune is getting a girl here only one tho plus an extra "What If" part of the very last chapter where Momo and Pyrrha have a triple relationship with Jaune as an alternate"extra" ending
4/15/2020 c1 Vercingetorix Rex
fairly average, too much text, descriptions (characters, environment, point of view) are missing
why would leaders send teenagers to an unknown world without any training and for which they aren't prepared?
the ending was confusing or seemed rushed.
what girls are jealous that Momo is holding Jaune's hand? Rwby girls? To-Love Ru girls?
good idea, bad execution.
fairly average, too much text, descriptions (characters, environment, point of view) are missing
why would leaders send teenagers to an unknown world without any training and for which they aren't prepared?
the ending was confusing or seemed rushed.
what girls are jealous that Momo is holding Jaune's hand? Rwby girls? To-Love Ru girls?
good idea, bad execution.