for The Return of the Salamander9/29/2023 c14 Passing guest
This is magnificent about Natsu getting betrayed and cursed albeit the OC granddaughter of gray is insufferable and unlikeable, I skip all of her parts and would probably enjoy the story more if Natsu companion was someone different like a Celestial Spirit or another long lived being.
If Natsu has the same immortality as Zeref why is he taking that long to heal is he fighting the healing or the curse isn't as effective as it was for his older brother?
This is magnificent about Natsu getting betrayed and cursed albeit the OC granddaughter of gray is insufferable and unlikeable, I skip all of her parts and would probably enjoy the story more if Natsu companion was someone different like a Celestial Spirit or another long lived being.
If Natsu has the same immortality as Zeref why is he taking that long to heal is he fighting the healing or the curse isn't as effective as it was for his older brother?
9/29/2023 c14 Guest
Excited to see more.
Excited to see more.
3/20/2022 c11 Guest
Really interesting and great story. I hope you continue the story in the future. I'm quite curious as to how the betrayal went down in the alvarez war that caused them to hate Natsu
Really interesting and great story. I hope you continue the story in the future. I'm quite curious as to how the betrayal went down in the alvarez war that caused them to hate Natsu
5/30/2021 c11 Guest
Idk how I'm just now finding this story, but this concept is TOP TIER. Please keep this one alive, it's so interesting! It's an innovated twist on Natsu's leave from the guild and I'm here for it!
Idk how I'm just now finding this story, but this concept is TOP TIER. Please keep this one alive, it's so interesting! It's an innovated twist on Natsu's leave from the guild and I'm here for it!
5/30/2021 c11 chrislgerlach
This is like the third time I’ve gotten an email saying a new chapter has been posted and it ends up being the same chapter again
This is like the third time I’ve gotten an email saying a new chapter has been posted and it ends up being the same chapter again
3/20/2021 c10 
7RavenDusk
Really, really good story! I've never really seen anything like this before, though I'm glad I gave it a chance. There are so many directions you could go with it and I am interested in which one you're going to pick. I will say, however, I think you should start getting to where you tell at least the readers what happened with Natsu, because you've been just hinting at it for a really long time. Also, the Omakes are kind of unnecessary, especially in every chapter. That's my two cents and I hope to see more!
7RavenDuskReally, really good story! I've never really seen anything like this before, though I'm glad I gave it a chance. There are so many directions you could go with it and I am interested in which one you're going to pick. I will say, however, I think you should start getting to where you tell at least the readers what happened with Natsu, because you've been just hinting at it for a really long time. Also, the Omakes are kind of unnecessary, especially in every chapter. That's my two cents and I hope to see more!
3/11/2021 c10 16Liatria
Let me first start this review on how freaking fantastic this story is! I am a sucker for Natsu betrayed stories, but you somehow contort it to happen in the future and with Lucy’s, I’m guessing Happy’s, deaths- I’m excited to see where you take this. Honestly, I thought the reason Fairy Tail disowned Natsu was because of the whole E.N.D situation, but Gray just had to be an asshole and take being the “Savior of Fiore” stuff. Though Natsu being a demon may have a lot of things to do with that.
I like how it’s not a random oc and instead someone of blood ties to someone in Fairy Tail, I think the struggle between most possibly choosing between Natsu and Gray will become harder for Yuki. I’m interested on if there’s going to be a couple of interactions between Fairy Tail and Natsu and if that’s going to go well- which I highly doubt. Gajeel also seems incredibly guilty from taking the title of highest ranking dragon slayers from Natsu, so I hope he goes to his side. Very curious as well on how Wendy found Natsu and if she went after him or anything, or convinced him to stay.
Anyway, so nicely done and definitely going to be recommending this!
16LiatriaLet me first start this review on how freaking fantastic this story is! I am a sucker for Natsu betrayed stories, but you somehow contort it to happen in the future and with Lucy’s, I’m guessing Happy’s, deaths- I’m excited to see where you take this. Honestly, I thought the reason Fairy Tail disowned Natsu was because of the whole E.N.D situation, but Gray just had to be an asshole and take being the “Savior of Fiore” stuff. Though Natsu being a demon may have a lot of things to do with that.
I like how it’s not a random oc and instead someone of blood ties to someone in Fairy Tail, I think the struggle between most possibly choosing between Natsu and Gray will become harder for Yuki. I’m interested on if there’s going to be a couple of interactions between Fairy Tail and Natsu and if that’s going to go well- which I highly doubt. Gajeel also seems incredibly guilty from taking the title of highest ranking dragon slayers from Natsu, so I hope he goes to his side. Very curious as well on how Wendy found Natsu and if she went after him or anything, or convinced him to stay.
Anyway, so nicely done and definitely going to be recommending this!
3/10/2021 c10 MPrime
Natsu betrayed by FT is always an interesting fanfic. But It's so sad that this Natsu cursed with immortality, Lucy's death and wendy's love life. (Just send Yuki to past through eclipse gate and fix everything, make her stay with Natsu, Lucy and Wendy. Make everyone younger etc. It's so tragic)
Also isn't this natsu should be known as the Dragon king? I hope you will mention him in this title somewhere. Can't wait to read what you have in your mind. Good luck.
Natsu betrayed by FT is always an interesting fanfic. But It's so sad that this Natsu cursed with immortality, Lucy's death and wendy's love life. (Just send Yuki to past through eclipse gate and fix everything, make her stay with Natsu, Lucy and Wendy. Make everyone younger etc. It's so tragic)
Also isn't this natsu should be known as the Dragon king? I hope you will mention him in this title somewhere. Can't wait to read what you have in your mind. Good luck.
3/5/2021 c10 10Thicc-Chungs
loved the chapter.
I was just thinking that maybe it would be different or something to think of talking about something.
I was thinking over the story and I didnt know the pairing. if it was Natsu x Yuki
but then somehow I was thinking of the magic that is being used.
devil slaying magic. if access use over it or if you make the marking grow, then you will turn into a demon just like how using access amount of dragon slayer magic turns you into a dragon.
you could have, down the line, natsu telling yuki that grey almost turned into a demon. only a failed transformation. and it was natsu who helped him turn back into human but no one knew about it. it could be grey killed half a million civilians in that state before turning back. but the old members hide it from the guild
10Thicc-Chungsloved the chapter.
I was just thinking that maybe it would be different or something to think of talking about something.
I was thinking over the story and I didnt know the pairing. if it was Natsu x Yuki
but then somehow I was thinking of the magic that is being used.
devil slaying magic. if access use over it or if you make the marking grow, then you will turn into a demon just like how using access amount of dragon slayer magic turns you into a dragon.
you could have, down the line, natsu telling yuki that grey almost turned into a demon. only a failed transformation. and it was natsu who helped him turn back into human but no one knew about it. it could be grey killed half a million civilians in that state before turning back. but the old members hide it from the guild
1/15/2021 c6 BlackDragonShinigami
six chapters in and that scene between him and cana ohhhhhh my heart just shattered i am just gonna say that im excited and looking forward to more chapters!
six chapters in and that scene between him and cana ohhhhhh my heart just shattered i am just gonna say that im excited and looking forward to more chapters!