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6/4 c7 1hyrushoten
So far I'm really enjoying this story. It's always nice to see Nanoha's family get to play a part. I also overall like the TSAB portions of the story, although I in general dislike it when stories use scenes set in the future. These are well done, but I still prefer not to know what's going to happen instead of wondering how something is going to happen. I do really like this story though and can't wait for more of it. Keep up the good work.
5/27 c7 Guest
I really want to know what will happen.
5/24 c7 SpeculatingSpectre543
Just wondering but will you do any omakes like Nanoha and/or Hayate holding auditions for new members.
like in JOHNNYFLASH "Autobots Audition to be the next" or even someone using the line "Eat Micheal Bay explosions!"
5/23 c7 5Forum Explorer
You zoomed through the first two seasons, but it looks like that's just setting the stage for the rest of the story. So I'm looking forward to what comes next.
5/16 c7 Guest
great chapter
5/15 c7 Guest
great chapter and oh boy will hayate stay same age as when sealed and also don't forget dp aka defense program had a regeneration that would make itself show up again when destroyed or finished destroying planet or something like that
5/15 c7 8Ghost of Los Angeles
I like how you’re flushing out the world once again I know this is being a sound like a broken record as to be expected of an author of your caliber.
5/8 c6 Guest
great chapter and oh boy just like a's and the movie here comes the defense program and also oh boy there goes the house hayate and wolkenritter lived in again
5/7 c6 1Someone64
Hmm, interesting development so far. So to compensate for her lack of power and upgrade she was supposed to get with the assistance of the TSAB, she chose to fused a jewel seed to give her the needed power. Well make do with what you got I supposed even if it was an on the spot moment. Though would love to see you continue to the point where Nanoha blows up Fate to be her friend. Lol
5/7 c6 8Ghost of Los Angeles
Did you change events? Yes you did. was it appropriate yes it was And did it flow? Yes it was and yes it did. Was it logical and in character? Once again Yes and yes. This continues to be of the excellent quality I expect of your work.
5/6 c5 Ghost of Los Angeles
Well done as to be expected of an author of your caliber.
5/4 c5 Guest
great chapter and this is either a happy or an uh-oh moment for Uminari I can't tell which one it is
5/3 c4 Guest
Curious were this go.
5/2 c4 Guest
oh whoops um forgot to add something will hayate and cohorts find out about what happened when the storm happened and destroyed her room and part of the house
5/2 c4 Guest
great chapter keep it up and I am the same one who wrote those two guest reviews, also well lets just hope this ends better also isn't it kinda hard to write a's without fate
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