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3/9 c6 1EVA-Saiyajin
A little rushed, but good.
3/9 c2 EVA-Saiyajin
Very nice. Should be interesting to see what happens when there’s no handy advisor around.
3/9 c1 EVA-Saiyajin
What a fascinating concept! I love it!
2/14 c1 Guest
Mais capítulos
6/4/2020 c7 1hyrushoten
So far I'm really enjoying this story. It's always nice to see Nanoha's family get to play a part. I also overall like the TSAB portions of the story, although I in general dislike it when stories use scenes set in the future. These are well done, but I still prefer not to know what's going to happen instead of wondering how something is going to happen. I do really like this story though and can't wait for more of it. Keep up the good work.
5/27/2020 c7 Guest
I really want to know what will happen.
5/24/2020 c7 SpeculatingSpectre543
Just wondering but will you do any omakes like Nanoha and/or Hayate holding auditions for new members.
like in JOHNNYFLASH "Autobots Audition to be the next" or even someone using the line "Eat Micheal Bay explosions!"
5/23/2020 c7 5Forum Explorer
You zoomed through the first two seasons, but it looks like that's just setting the stage for the rest of the story. So I'm looking forward to what comes next.
5/16/2020 c7 Guest
great chapter
5/15/2020 c7 Guest
great chapter and oh boy will hayate stay same age as when sealed and also don't forget dp aka defense program had a regeneration that would make itself show up again when destroyed or finished destroying planet or something like that
5/15/2020 c7 8Ghost of Los Angeles
I like how you’re flushing out the world once again I know this is being a sound like a broken record as to be expected of an author of your caliber.
5/8/2020 c6 Guest
great chapter and oh boy just like a's and the movie here comes the defense program and also oh boy there goes the house hayate and wolkenritter lived in again
5/7/2020 c6 1Someone64
Hmm, interesting development so far. So to compensate for her lack of power and upgrade she was supposed to get with the assistance of the TSAB, she chose to fused a jewel seed to give her the needed power. Well make do with what you got I supposed even if it was an on the spot moment. Though would love to see you continue to the point where Nanoha blows up Fate to be her friend. Lol
5/7/2020 c6 8Ghost of Los Angeles
Did you change events? Yes you did. was it appropriate yes it was And did it flow? Yes it was and yes it did. Was it logical and in character? Once again Yes and yes. This continues to be of the excellent quality I expect of your work.
5/6/2020 c5 Ghost of Los Angeles
Well done as to be expected of an author of your caliber.
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