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10Auguruj
Bagnold does seem like a bit of a Liz person, at least in her view of Wizengamot.
Maybe I'm already prejudiced, but Dorea gets on my nerves even when she doesn't really do anything stupid or offensive. Idly watching Liz? Like she had nothing better to do... she does know that Liz can feel that, physically, right? And it usually bothers her? It was published, she must have read it. Yet she either doesn't care, doesn't care to remember or she can't really be bothered to try and expend some energy to keep herself from doing it.
You wrote we instead of why in that bit at the end where Liz is being snappy.
10AugurujBagnold does seem like a bit of a Liz person, at least in her view of Wizengamot.
Maybe I'm already prejudiced, but Dorea gets on my nerves even when she doesn't really do anything stupid or offensive. Idly watching Liz? Like she had nothing better to do... she does know that Liz can feel that, physically, right? And it usually bothers her? It was published, she must have read it. Yet she either doesn't care, doesn't care to remember or she can't really be bothered to try and expend some energy to keep herself from doing it.
You wrote we instead of why in that bit at the end where Liz is being snappy.
3/24 c135 Auguruj
We better be calling emotions You-Know-What (and flinching when mentioned, too) when connected to Liz I guess. Several times now she referred to feeling things like "having feelings" and it reads as if she considered it something... eh... ill-fitted? Untoward? Can't thing of the proper expression.
We better be calling emotions You-Know-What (and flinching when mentioned, too) when connected to Liz I guess. Several times now she referred to feeling things like "having feelings" and it reads as if she considered it something... eh... ill-fitted? Untoward? Can't thing of the proper expression.
3/24 c134 Auguruj
Thank you, he will probably live. Although, he is supposed to marry Síomha, right? I kind of forgot about that, you probably wouldn't have killed him then... could have occurred to me when I was reading the previous chapter...
He seriously went looking for his death eater friends, trying to persuade them into defecting when Voldemort (or whatever his name is now) is not only back but considerably more sane? Liz was right, he was supposed to be the smart one.
Liz is kind of cute when she is so out of her mind with worry that she tries to go to breakfast like a normal person. But I really like that she is getting to spend some time with Síomha, they need that, despite the circumstances. And I in particular like that she actually got to see Síomha without her Occlumency for a change! If Liz kind if recognizes people through mind magic, and is probably also getting an "image" about their personality that way, then Síomha was probably still a total stranger for her up until now, what with her Occlumency shields being what they are. Which is probably why I always had a feeling like there was some weird kind of distance or barrier between them.
Huh - wait. There actually kind of literally was, the Occlumency shield, right? Huh.
Ok: if THIS subplot was intentional on your part then good job, it completely threw me off the loop. I usually get a read on things sooner than this...
Thank you, he will probably live. Although, he is supposed to marry Síomha, right? I kind of forgot about that, you probably wouldn't have killed him then... could have occurred to me when I was reading the previous chapter...
He seriously went looking for his death eater friends, trying to persuade them into defecting when Voldemort (or whatever his name is now) is not only back but considerably more sane? Liz was right, he was supposed to be the smart one.
Liz is kind of cute when she is so out of her mind with worry that she tries to go to breakfast like a normal person. But I really like that she is getting to spend some time with Síomha, they need that, despite the circumstances. And I in particular like that she actually got to see Síomha without her Occlumency for a change! If Liz kind if recognizes people through mind magic, and is probably also getting an "image" about their personality that way, then Síomha was probably still a total stranger for her up until now, what with her Occlumency shields being what they are. Which is probably why I always had a feeling like there was some weird kind of distance or barrier between them.
Huh - wait. There actually kind of literally was, the Occlumency shield, right? Huh.
Ok: if THIS subplot was intentional on your part then good job, it completely threw me off the loop. I usually get a read on things sooner than this...
3/21 c137 asjblackthorne
Yay, another awesome chapter! Can't wait to see how Sev heals up and how the blood alchemy works out.
Yay, another awesome chapter! Can't wait to see how Sev heals up and how the blood alchemy works out.
3/20 c4 Lot1t
Have you ever heard of the principle of "show, not tell"? They might as well have written, "I came, I saw, I won," and finished the fanfiction.
Have you ever heard of the principle of "show, not tell"? They might as well have written, "I came, I saw, I won," and finished the fanfiction.
3/20 c2 Lot1t
Another caricature Dambug, disgusting. There are practically no dialogues, instead of the text there is a continuous stream of thoughts. The same theses can be repeated ten times in a couple of paragraphs, this is unacceptable. There is not enough view from the outside, although it may continue to be.
Another caricature Dambug, disgusting. There are practically no dialogues, instead of the text there is a continuous stream of thoughts. The same theses can be repeated ten times in a couple of paragraphs, this is unacceptable. There is not enough view from the outside, although it may continue to be.
3/5 c132 Yomugan
Random thought. Liz has a significantly more ruthless streak in this story than Beth from First Contact does. If Liz learns about the Potter houses ‘indentured servants’ how quickly will she go from, “Britian is a shithole” to “Im going to burn down the government”
Random thought. Liz has a significantly more ruthless streak in this story than Beth from First Contact does. If Liz learns about the Potter houses ‘indentured servants’ how quickly will she go from, “Britian is a shithole” to “Im going to burn down the government”
3/1 c133 Auguruj
Huh, good chapter. Pretty anxiety-inducing, but still. Came a bit soon, I would have expected it would take longer before anything came biting at Severus. I really hope you're not going to kill him, it's enough that Rowling did it. And Liz doesn't even remember that dream she had, does she? Ouch, she is not having a good day...
The bit with her leaning against Síomha's mind for the calm was meant probably like a crutch to calm herself down, but somehow I keep jumping to a thought that it might be the closest Liz will ever come to proper Occlumency shields, with herself being unable to occlude. I wonder is a contact with Síomha's Occlumency shield could work a bit like a placebo - like kind of "borrowing" some kind of effect for her own use, for her own mind.
Huh, good chapter. Pretty anxiety-inducing, but still. Came a bit soon, I would have expected it would take longer before anything came biting at Severus. I really hope you're not going to kill him, it's enough that Rowling did it. And Liz doesn't even remember that dream she had, does she? Ouch, she is not having a good day...
The bit with her leaning against Síomha's mind for the calm was meant probably like a crutch to calm herself down, but somehow I keep jumping to a thought that it might be the closest Liz will ever come to proper Occlumency shields, with herself being unable to occlude. I wonder is a contact with Síomha's Occlumency shield could work a bit like a placebo - like kind of "borrowing" some kind of effect for her own use, for her own mind.
2/27 c131 mparshley
im waiting with held breath for the next chapter and keep being confused when every update is a new chapter deleted...
im waiting with held breath for the next chapter and keep being confused when every update is a new chapter deleted...
2/12 c132 Auguruj
Attending Order of the Phoenix meeting, and for some reason playing much nicer than I would have expected her to. At least she got a book out of it.
Attending Order of the Phoenix meeting, and for some reason playing much nicer than I would have expected her to. At least she got a book out of it.
2/11 c131 Auguruj
Well, isn't Dorea cute, wondering how Liz will fare when she won't be able to use proxies anymore... she's known her for a few years and she still doesn't seem to get that Liz won't give a shit...
Well, isn't Dorea cute, wondering how Liz will fare when she won't be able to use proxies anymore... she's known her for a few years and she still doesn't seem to get that Liz won't give a shit...
2/11 c130 Auguruj
Networking ongoing it seems, though Tamsyn as a teacher at Hogwarts... can't imagine that.
Networking ongoing it seems, though Tamsyn as a teacher at Hogwarts... can't imagine that.
1/29 c132 death390
but more spelling errors than normal.
otherwise greatcongrats on the recovery,
not sure who is more looking forward to the blood alchemy ltz or the community. your to see it soon.
though would mind a talk with liz and tamsyn about travers, and her explaining that she is "using" the order to get rid of someone ahe finds to be reprehensible rather than break the truce
but more spelling errors than normal.
otherwise greatcongrats on the recovery,
not sure who is more looking forward to the blood alchemy ltz or the community. your to see it soon.
though would mind a talk with liz and tamsyn about travers, and her explaining that she is "using" the order to get rid of someone ahe finds to be reprehensible rather than break the truce