for Professor Kurosaki12/18/2020 c2 Guest
cant wait for the next chapter
cant wait for the next chapter
11/26/2020 c2 Lautaro Ruggiero
I've never watched Sekirei but I found this fanfic looking for some Bleach fanfic, and I've gotta say that so far so good. I'm looking forward as how you manage the Harem, and having Yoruichi around certainly is a big plus, better yet if she gets in the harem, I always loved the relationship she had with Ichigo in the series, as short as their interactions were.
Looking forward to next upload.
I've never watched Sekirei but I found this fanfic looking for some Bleach fanfic, and I've gotta say that so far so good. I'm looking forward as how you manage the Harem, and having Yoruichi around certainly is a big plus, better yet if she gets in the harem, I always loved the relationship she had with Ichigo in the series, as short as their interactions were.
Looking forward to next upload.
11/22/2020 c2 
10StoryReiter
AHAHAHAHAH THIS IS GREAT! AHAHAHAHA! TAKEHITO IS ALIVE(kinda)! Although Im worried and really hope he doesnt become a Hollow. I love him chilling around considering he managed to marry MIYA of all people. Also it was implied that he can do the Hannya Mask Projection now consider ICHIGO lace it with his Reiatsu. Im really looking forward to it because when it comes to harems as overused as it is, its the characters and their interactions that make it worth it. Im really excited and happy for it because recently updated Sekirei crossovers that I like are... close to none. For seeing his ghost well... This is Ichigo protector trouble magnet extraordinare. Thank you for writing and sharing, take care, God bless and have a good day author.
Oh and Yume's alive, I think Karasuba will be a treat to see. White IS part of Ichigo after all. As to Yume, heh right, considering this is a man who goes raids "Heaven" and hell for the sake of his loved ones as well as wanting to protect a mountain of people, theyll get along well. Denseness... Sekirei have a work around, Yuroichi and Orihime shall be jelly.
Once again, thanks and God bless. Take care.
10StoryReiterAHAHAHAHAH THIS IS GREAT! AHAHAHAHA! TAKEHITO IS ALIVE(kinda)! Although Im worried and really hope he doesnt become a Hollow. I love him chilling around considering he managed to marry MIYA of all people. Also it was implied that he can do the Hannya Mask Projection now consider ICHIGO lace it with his Reiatsu. Im really looking forward to it because when it comes to harems as overused as it is, its the characters and their interactions that make it worth it. Im really excited and happy for it because recently updated Sekirei crossovers that I like are... close to none. For seeing his ghost well... This is Ichigo protector trouble magnet extraordinare. Thank you for writing and sharing, take care, God bless and have a good day author.
Oh and Yume's alive, I think Karasuba will be a treat to see. White IS part of Ichigo after all. As to Yume, heh right, considering this is a man who goes raids "Heaven" and hell for the sake of his loved ones as well as wanting to protect a mountain of people, theyll get along well. Denseness... Sekirei have a work around, Yuroichi and Orihime shall be jelly.
Once again, thanks and God bless. Take care.
11/5/2020 c2 ChaosOmega98
He should meet Karabasa and have her react to him
Does he still have his powers if not they should slowly come back to him if he wings a sekirei
He should meet Karabasa and have her react to him
Does he still have his powers if not they should slowly come back to him if he wings a sekirei
11/3/2020 c1 2hughfj08
Enjoyable read. Only criticism is the whole nosebleed collapse thing. Always hated it in anime and dont think it translates any better in a written format.
2hughfj08Enjoyable read. Only criticism is the whole nosebleed collapse thing. Always hated it in anime and dont think it translates any better in a written format.
11/2/2020 c2 4AadenHelan
pretty interesting so far, but i wonder do you plan to put Yoruichi in the harem? to be honest Orihime pairing is one of the most abstract things ever, there's no build up or anything and suddenly they just sagging off but meh i doesn't really care about her except if you planning to making a more reasonable development unlike the canon
4AadenHelanpretty interesting so far, but i wonder do you plan to put Yoruichi in the harem? to be honest Orihime pairing is one of the most abstract things ever, there's no build up or anything and suddenly they just sagging off but meh i doesn't really care about her except if you planning to making a more reasonable development unlike the canon
10/30/2020 c2 8SomethingAncient
Bleach is one of the bigger fandoms in fanfiction, and Bleach/Sekirei crossovers are right up there in terms of popularity with Bleach/DxD crossovers in terms of anticipation. And seeing how there's ambition, new ideas, respect for both source materials, and effort, I'm not surprised in the slightest you got this much of a response. So far, so good, in my opinion.
That said: I like Orihime (especially just before the final fight with Yhwach) but I have never read a fanfic that convinced me she and Ichigo make any sense as a couple. Canon is even worse for that. They don't have similar hobbies, their personalities are very different, and even in the final chapter of the manga, it shows more intimacy between Ichigo and Rukia than between Ichigo and Orihime. I wish canon would have done more about Ichigo showing he was interested in Orihime, but alas, Kubo didn't write it like that. Personally, I was hoping Orihime wasn't going to be a love interest in this one, since nearly everyone does it. But now I'm just rambling. Ignore this part, I'm just venting and mentally preparing. Do what you want to do; it's your story.
But, here's some advice here to help you write it more convincingly, even if I don't share your opinion of that ship: Don't retroactively make Ichigo romantically interested in Orihime. Build Ichigo's interest in Orihime over time, pointing out something that Orihime does that he notices every so often to make it plausible that Ichigo could think of her in a romantic light (show, don't tell). I say this because just saying Ichigo felt that way, when the source material shows nothing of the sort, is uncanny. Give them small interactions that lead to bigger ones later.
I hope you find that advice useful.
Have a great week and God bless,
SomethingAncient
8SomethingAncientBleach is one of the bigger fandoms in fanfiction, and Bleach/Sekirei crossovers are right up there in terms of popularity with Bleach/DxD crossovers in terms of anticipation. And seeing how there's ambition, new ideas, respect for both source materials, and effort, I'm not surprised in the slightest you got this much of a response. So far, so good, in my opinion.
That said: I like Orihime (especially just before the final fight with Yhwach) but I have never read a fanfic that convinced me she and Ichigo make any sense as a couple. Canon is even worse for that. They don't have similar hobbies, their personalities are very different, and even in the final chapter of the manga, it shows more intimacy between Ichigo and Rukia than between Ichigo and Orihime. I wish canon would have done more about Ichigo showing he was interested in Orihime, but alas, Kubo didn't write it like that. Personally, I was hoping Orihime wasn't going to be a love interest in this one, since nearly everyone does it. But now I'm just rambling. Ignore this part, I'm just venting and mentally preparing. Do what you want to do; it's your story.
But, here's some advice here to help you write it more convincingly, even if I don't share your opinion of that ship: Don't retroactively make Ichigo romantically interested in Orihime. Build Ichigo's interest in Orihime over time, pointing out something that Orihime does that he notices every so often to make it plausible that Ichigo could think of her in a romantic light (show, don't tell). I say this because just saying Ichigo felt that way, when the source material shows nothing of the sort, is uncanny. Give them small interactions that lead to bigger ones later.
I hope you find that advice useful.
Have a great week and God bless,
SomethingAncient
10/29/2020 c2 Guest
Good so far I just hope that you will continue.
Good so far I just hope that you will continue.