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1/12 c15 Starfyre Dragon
Wow. Persona 3 MMC also appear here!
Good chapter.
12/29/2020 c30 Blaze1992
I really don't like this ending.
12/24/2020 c30 Guest
Dam man, keep up the good work.
12/21/2020 c30 8Ultidragonlord
I came here to have a good time. But all I got was just being sad.
12/8/2020 c30 Thrae
Lovely! So entertaining. It's nice to see Cade grow as a character. It feels as if he's now more aware of loss, and consequences. It's similar to Eragon's evolution when he becomes more aware of loss of life, particularly when he changes his mind about urgals to see them as more than just monsters. I believe this realisation is a key moment in his journey and helps towards defeating Galbatorix. Understanding is a powerful tool/weapon.
I look forward to seeing how Cade matures and works through his issues.
I also have another idea. Are you familiar with Kingdom Hearts? Some keyblade wielders would fit right in with your story.
Merry Christmas! See you in 2021!
12/6/2020 c30 awesomesniper86


12/6/2020 c30 awesomesniper86
“This is enough ‘step’s to start a staircase.”



I hate puns...

And everything similar...
12/6/2020 c30 MoosHeadFamLit
12/6/2020 c30 3d8rkforcen1ght7
Great Chapter. I'm looking forward to the third book. I'll be in chat if you need anything, Sleepysaurus Elda.
12/6/2020 c30 HeadlessHessian
Damn, just damn.
TSL is gonna be epic
12/2/2020 c29 Vognar-The Legendkeep
Man that was fantastic, great imagery. Great, Well everything really. I look forward to the next.

but I have bad feeling about our missing plainswalker...
12/1/2020 c29 Thrae
Ohhh, poor Cade. He needs a spa day, or week (maybe with Saphira?)(giggles).
I was wondering about something, is it possible for plainswalkers to have kids? With each other or with those in other worlds?
I'm glad you enjoy writing, it should make your stories better and more heartfelt.
Best of luck!
11/30/2020 c29 d8rkforcen1ght7
First, Famine stole my Dark Spikes attack. Second, great battle sequence...third, it seems that Cade actually damaged this thing enough for the others to beat Famine but I'm not sure... finally: StormScales for the win!
11/30/2020 c29 awesomesniper86


11/29/2020 c29 HeadlessHessian
Review no.4 of the same chapter :)
I think u forgot your own plot in a way, remember Murtaugh? Where is he in the BOTBP?
There was also the whole thing about the bug Cade planted in his shoulder, are you purposely saving that for later use or something?
And fear not, for I shall post no more reviews, I've reached the limit of my reviewing powers ( for this chapter, that is.)
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