for Time10/25/2023 c1 
49Vixinette
Yeah, exactly! Messing with time is very bad! But things happen! I love this story and the summery is great!
49VixinetteYeah, exactly! Messing with time is very bad! But things happen! I love this story and the summery is great!
7/15/2021 c10 NaughtyCat9
Oh my StarClan! I loved this! Whenever I hear the name Kiki, I think of Kiki’s Delivery Service.
Oh my StarClan! I loved this! Whenever I hear the name Kiki, I think of Kiki’s Delivery Service.
11/30/2020 c4 Hehe
I like this so far, it's nice to read this :)
I like this so far, it's nice to read this :)
7/12/2020 c9 38sailorlyoko4life
OMG this has been soooo cool to read! I love it! I love the turn you took with AM (alternate marinette) calling out Gabriel, I definitely didn't see that one coming! (It would be interesting if her and this lila became legit friends) I wonder what it will be like with her using tikki and de-evalizing akumas if she is causing them, also because she doesn't do so on her world. I wonder if tikki has caught on that this isn't her marinette yet. (she could be talking to master fu about this problem while she isn't with AM.) I also wonder if AM is going to reveal to tikki who hawkmoth is. I also wonder if chat noir will figure out this isn't his lady. Once she starts loosening up on asking personal questions I feel like he should start seeing the red flags. I wonder if she will flirt back with him too. (That would be hilarious lol)
And as for our marinette, I hope her and chat blanc do get together. Mari/blanc can be very hot when it wants to be lol. Plus our mari needs to loosen up a little. (the punching Nathaniel scene was fantastic!) I actually do like the idea of marinette becoming a little more like AM due to the influence of dark tikki and transforming. It shows that the corruption can effect our marinette the same way as it did to AM which will show that AM isnt only as dark as she is because of her different life.
Oh and I love how you've twisted things for these girls! AM is trying to figure out chat noirs identity, while our marintte is close to figuring out chat blancs identity on complete accident. Adding that to them both falling in love with the alternate versions of their true loves makes it all the more invigorating. And both lukas having a secret from the girls is interesting too. (maybe he is planning to move away, or planning on proposing? Only you know lol)
I can't wait to read more! Your doing such a great job with this!
38sailorlyoko4lifeOMG this has been soooo cool to read! I love it! I love the turn you took with AM (alternate marinette) calling out Gabriel, I definitely didn't see that one coming! (It would be interesting if her and this lila became legit friends) I wonder what it will be like with her using tikki and de-evalizing akumas if she is causing them, also because she doesn't do so on her world. I wonder if tikki has caught on that this isn't her marinette yet. (she could be talking to master fu about this problem while she isn't with AM.) I also wonder if AM is going to reveal to tikki who hawkmoth is. I also wonder if chat noir will figure out this isn't his lady. Once she starts loosening up on asking personal questions I feel like he should start seeing the red flags. I wonder if she will flirt back with him too. (That would be hilarious lol)
And as for our marinette, I hope her and chat blanc do get together. Mari/blanc can be very hot when it wants to be lol. Plus our mari needs to loosen up a little. (the punching Nathaniel scene was fantastic!) I actually do like the idea of marinette becoming a little more like AM due to the influence of dark tikki and transforming. It shows that the corruption can effect our marinette the same way as it did to AM which will show that AM isnt only as dark as she is because of her different life.
Oh and I love how you've twisted things for these girls! AM is trying to figure out chat noirs identity, while our marintte is close to figuring out chat blancs identity on complete accident. Adding that to them both falling in love with the alternate versions of their true loves makes it all the more invigorating. And both lukas having a secret from the girls is interesting too. (maybe he is planning to move away, or planning on proposing? Only you know lol)
I can't wait to read more! Your doing such a great job with this!
7/9/2020 c9 Mari Chat
I love this so far, update soon!
I love this so far, update soon!
6/30/2020 c9 Kitty
Love this, this is so awesome!
Love this, this is so awesome!
6/29/2020 c9 staterfe
Mi opinion personal:
Creo que clasificas M por el Lukanette? la verdad no me interesa esta pareja, en el sentido de que la mala Marinette este con el. No de que escribas de ellos. Después de todo necesitamos saber que pasa en los dos mundos. Solo espero una advertencia cuando eso pase y saltar esa parte. Lo que si me gustaría saber, como se sentirá Luka al saber que Marinette no es virgen. Si esto se dirige hay, me gustaría saber. jajajaja. Después de todo Marinette aun es una "niña" que ha mostrado ser inocente y pura. Por eso este Luka se enamoro de ella. Cuando descubra la verdad le pedirá que traiga a la verdadera Marinette. ¿?
Definitivamente quiero un Mariblanc. Esos dos estan destinados a estar juntos. Hay amor en ambas partes.
Tikki estará planeando algo?. Le dirá la verdad a Chat y recuperar a Ladybug?
Bunnix ayudara?.
Mi opinion personal:
Creo que clasificas M por el Lukanette? la verdad no me interesa esta pareja, en el sentido de que la mala Marinette este con el. No de que escribas de ellos. Después de todo necesitamos saber que pasa en los dos mundos. Solo espero una advertencia cuando eso pase y saltar esa parte. Lo que si me gustaría saber, como se sentirá Luka al saber que Marinette no es virgen. Si esto se dirige hay, me gustaría saber. jajajaja. Después de todo Marinette aun es una "niña" que ha mostrado ser inocente y pura. Por eso este Luka se enamoro de ella. Cuando descubra la verdad le pedirá que traiga a la verdadera Marinette. ¿?
Definitivamente quiero un Mariblanc. Esos dos estan destinados a estar juntos. Hay amor en ambas partes.
Tikki estará planeando algo?. Le dirá la verdad a Chat y recuperar a Ladybug?
Bunnix ayudara?.
6/19/2020 c8 MiraculousDragon
Very intriguing story so far! Poor tomato head, his counterpart is intriguing though. The mirror in the bedtime story made me faintly think of the The Snow Queen story.
Very intriguing story so far! Poor tomato head, his counterpart is intriguing though. The mirror in the bedtime story made me faintly think of the The Snow Queen story.
6/18/2020 c8 staterfe
Me da pena que en en mundo canónico no se den cuenta que la dulce Marinette se halla ido. Es como decir, Adrien no siente nada por Ladybug ni Marinette.
Si la dulce Marinette deja a Chat Blanc. Ojalas le deje una carta de despedida. Aunque espero que se quede en ese mundo si nadie la extraña en el otro.
La mala Marinette tiene que aprender una gran lección.
Mi dulce Chat Blanc. Siempre tiene poco amor y cuando tiene la oportunidad de algo mas grande se la pueden arrebatar.
Me dejaste intrigada que la mala Marinetta haya viajado anteriormente a otras dimensiones. Deberían quitarle ese poder.
Quitarle a Kiki. Ella no merece un poder tan grande.
Me da pena que en en mundo canónico no se den cuenta que la dulce Marinette se halla ido. Es como decir, Adrien no siente nada por Ladybug ni Marinette.
Si la dulce Marinette deja a Chat Blanc. Ojalas le deje una carta de despedida. Aunque espero que se quede en ese mundo si nadie la extraña en el otro.
La mala Marinette tiene que aprender una gran lección.
Mi dulce Chat Blanc. Siempre tiene poco amor y cuando tiene la oportunidad de algo mas grande se la pueden arrebatar.
Me dejaste intrigada que la mala Marinetta haya viajado anteriormente a otras dimensiones. Deberían quitarle ese poder.
Quitarle a Kiki. Ella no merece un poder tan grande.
6/17/2020 c7 staterfe
Acá tienes una fan de MariBlanc. Muy feliz si vas por este camino.
Sobre la malvada Marinette, me preocupa que quiera un deseo, no sabe el costo?. Ademas si sabe quien es Hawkmoth ya sabrá quien es Chat Noir. Ella siendo Ladybug fácilmente podría quitarle el anillo a Chat Noir. Sera que algo esta planeando al hacerle creer a Gabriel que esta de su lado?. Una trampa?.
No sabemos mucho de la malvada Marinette. Como se esta enamorando de Adrien. Es de Adrien o de Chat Noir?. Adrien ya rompió con Kagami?
Donde esta Bunnix?.
Tantas preguntas.
Acá tienes una fan de MariBlanc. Muy feliz si vas por este camino.
Sobre la malvada Marinette, me preocupa que quiera un deseo, no sabe el costo?. Ademas si sabe quien es Hawkmoth ya sabrá quien es Chat Noir. Ella siendo Ladybug fácilmente podría quitarle el anillo a Chat Noir. Sera que algo esta planeando al hacerle creer a Gabriel que esta de su lado?. Una trampa?.
No sabemos mucho de la malvada Marinette. Como se esta enamorando de Adrien. Es de Adrien o de Chat Noir?. Adrien ya rompió con Kagami?
Donde esta Bunnix?.
Tantas preguntas.
6/16/2020 c7 1k+KagamiPINKAgreste
Huh the bad ass Marinette actually put off her home dimension Gabriel? That's disturbing (NOT in the fun way). LOVE the line - Marinette compared Lila as a baby cub trying to scare off a ferocious lion. -
Damn seriously? Her home dimension Gabriel is in a affair with Nathalie? Well definitely blackmail material. But sorry Bad Ass Dupain-Cheng that's NOT the case here. Nathalie could do way better than her boss too. She IS bad ass for the better. *Laughs Hiss-terically*
She got old Gabe right where she wants him. Moron right, it's obvious much like most Miraculous. Gabriel slapped Adrien?! Oh that's it. . . KILL HIM! Oh Kitty, right not Nino tonight (oh damn it) but to Marinette's own.
1k+KagamiPINKAgresteHuh the bad ass Marinette actually put off her home dimension Gabriel? That's disturbing (NOT in the fun way). LOVE the line - Marinette compared Lila as a baby cub trying to scare off a ferocious lion. -
Damn seriously? Her home dimension Gabriel is in a affair with Nathalie? Well definitely blackmail material. But sorry Bad Ass Dupain-Cheng that's NOT the case here. Nathalie could do way better than her boss too. She IS bad ass for the better. *Laughs Hiss-terically*
She got old Gabe right where she wants him. Moron right, it's obvious much like most Miraculous. Gabriel slapped Adrien?! Oh that's it. . . KILL HIM! Oh Kitty, right not Nino tonight (oh damn it) but to Marinette's own.