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7/12 c10 Guest
Aww this is so cute!
5/25 c11 14daughterofathena2
This is sweet but oh my gosh you need to learn about paragraph breaks. Every time a new character speaks, it starts a new paragraph.
For example:
It had been hours since anyone had even heard from Nick let alone knew where he was and everyone had begun to get worried. No one more than Schmidt though,
“What do you mean calm down, for all we know he's run off and joined an underground cult where you never have to work again and we'll never see him again.” This comment alone was enough for Cece to know that he needed to calm down and come home, leaving Jess and Winston alone in the loft. They talked about a whole manner of things from Winston's happiness with Aly, how despite growing up over the past few years Jess had known him Schmidt really did seems to be eternally dramatic when at exactly 9:36 PM, approximately 11 and a half hours after he had disappeared without telling anyone where he was going, Jess heard the keys jingling at the door
"Nick? Miller are you home?" She walked towards the door with Winston following convinced it wasn't Nick but someone trying to break into the loft.
“Winston if it was someone trying to break in how would he have a key?!“ She whisper shouted whilst simultaneously rolling her eyes.
“Oh right right right. That makes sense.”
Wasn't he a cop, supposed to know stuff like this? Thought Jess
5/9 c10 Bee
Amazing! Please keep going!
5/6 c10 Guest
Is there gonna be any more? I love New Girl and would love to read some more of this story

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