for A Lion's Pride5/13/2020 c1 
1carrotcakeo5
This was cute! And a lot of fun to read! The only thing I'd say is that I don't think Lucy would be that harsh to him. I think she would scold him a little and then calm down and thank him for doing his best before sending him back. She's pretty forgiving like that. I don't think she'd ever say he's good for nothing. Other than that it was really fun! Thanks for making this!
1carrotcakeo5This was cute! And a lot of fun to read! The only thing I'd say is that I don't think Lucy would be that harsh to him. I think she would scold him a little and then calm down and thank him for doing his best before sending him back. She's pretty forgiving like that. I don't think she'd ever say he's good for nothing. Other than that it was really fun! Thanks for making this!
4/23/2020 c1 6XoMidnightXo
I feel so bad for Loke, Lucy should just accept his love and affection
Besides the point, this was funny! It was a literal cat and mouse game XD
6XoMidnightXoI feel so bad for Loke, Lucy should just accept his love and affection
Besides the point, this was funny! It was a literal cat and mouse game XD