for Shinobi and their Multiple Jobs1/2 c1 
1ToapAN
love your story. The characters feel natural and not forced and the chemistry is just great. keep it up
1ToapANlove your story. The characters feel natural and not forced and the chemistry is just great. keep it up
12/13/2021 c30 Guest
Please don't ever say again that FTDS is a great writer. Did you know that he justified the First Crusade and the Rhineland Massacres, both of in which the Catholic Crusaders indiscriminately slaughtered non-Catholics instead of taking back the land stolen from them like they were ordered to do? Whenever FTDS brings up religion, he always makes out Catholicism to be pure good while depicting Muslims as bloodthirsty zealots who thrive on killing innocent people and see no sin in killing children. There's also what that Onishin guy said about FTDS forcing his "Trump is the best president to have ever existed, allowing the Democratic Party to exist was a mistake" beliefs onto others.
Rant over. Anyways, your story is decent, though it's a bit rushed in since parts, namely the Asia arc. It was pretty much brushed through, and Kalawarner and Mittelt didn't even show up.
Also, I vote to name the kid Lilith if a girl (like in canon) and Kuro if a boy.
Please don't ever say again that FTDS is a great writer. Did you know that he justified the First Crusade and the Rhineland Massacres, both of in which the Catholic Crusaders indiscriminately slaughtered non-Catholics instead of taking back the land stolen from them like they were ordered to do? Whenever FTDS brings up religion, he always makes out Catholicism to be pure good while depicting Muslims as bloodthirsty zealots who thrive on killing innocent people and see no sin in killing children. There's also what that Onishin guy said about FTDS forcing his "Trump is the best president to have ever existed, allowing the Democratic Party to exist was a mistake" beliefs onto others.
Rant over. Anyways, your story is decent, though it's a bit rushed in since parts, namely the Asia arc. It was pretty much brushed through, and Kalawarner and Mittelt didn't even show up.
Also, I vote to name the kid Lilith if a girl (like in canon) and Kuro if a boy.
12/1/2021 c10 Guest
да да да боже мой какой же это кайф
да да да боже мой какой же это кайф
12/1/2021 c7 Guest
всё так же бесподобно продолжай
всё так же бесподобно продолжай
12/1/2021 c6 Guest
и снова полный отпад
и снова полный отпад
12/1/2021 c5 Guest
это богоподобно
это богоподобно
11/19/2021 c30 Dylan.lucky
hahahaha man but what a good chapter I have some good names for babies if the baby of ophis is male I like the names Andros or Akashi if you do it girl Oriana or the clacico give it the name in honor of the mother of Naruto Kushina but it is very seen and unoriginal
hahahaha man but what a good chapter I have some good names for babies if the baby of ophis is male I like the names Andros or Akashi if you do it girl Oriana or the clacico give it the name in honor of the mother of Naruto Kushina but it is very seen and unoriginal
11/6/2021 c30 Guest
Did something happen to the author
Did something happen to the author
10/23/2021 c30 Guest
Very good story but when next update
Very good story but when next update