for Not Such A Game Anymore!9/12/2024 c4 Marshman101
This is such an amazing story, I hope more gets made as I really wanna see her interact with more monster girls
This is such an amazing story, I hope more gets made as I really wanna see her interact with more monster girls
9/28/2020 c3 Guest
Hey, where are the gacha's items from? I know some stuff is from Touhou and Fate, but could you put the sources?
Hey, where are the gacha's items from? I know some stuff is from Touhou and Fate, but could you put the sources?
7/9/2020 c2 Fushes
If she become a Bard have a Gacha Roll and it will say Random Stand and the Stand is Michael Jackson.
If she become a Bard have a Gacha Roll and it will say Random Stand and the Stand is Michael Jackson.
5/15/2020 c3 
3The-4uditor
So... original trilogy with paradox elements? Because marcellus shouldn't be in the terrorist group in paradox.
3The-4uditorSo... original trilogy with paradox elements? Because marcellus shouldn't be in the terrorist group in paradox.
5/15/2020 c3 TetSuoRai
Yes! We have the adorable umbrella tsukomogami in this story! Can't wait when she meets Ahria
Yes! We have the adorable umbrella tsukomogami in this story! Can't wait when she meets Ahria
5/15/2020 c3 Guest
Hang on was this fanfic using the original plot or the paradox version? Sorry I’m just dumb interpreting things
Hang on was this fanfic using the original plot or the paradox version? Sorry I’m just dumb interpreting things
5/15/2020 c2 Azure-Star-Dragon
Maybe you could add the Crest from Fire Emblem Three Houses to the Gacha as blood vials that when consumed give the person the Crest that resides within that blood. Maybe you could even add the Relics.
Maybe you could add the Crest from Fire Emblem Three Houses to the Gacha as blood vials that when consumed give the person the Crest that resides within that blood. Maybe you could even add the Relics.
5/13/2020 c2 4Dinosaurchicken
Yes child, embrace your inner thief!
In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!
4DinosaurchickenYes child, embrace your inner thief!
In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!
5/12/2020 c4 Dinosaurchicken
Yes child, embrace your inner thief!
In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!
Yes child, embrace your inner thief!
In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!
5/12/2020 c4 Your Midnight Scribe
When in the timeline of MGQ is this fic currently? Considering Alice isn't with Luka I assume that means this takes place prior to the game, but by how many years?
When in the timeline of MGQ is this fic currently? Considering Alice isn't with Luka I assume that means this takes place prior to the game, but by how many years?
5/12/2020 c4 Someone
Well done with the chapter. By the way you don’t have to force yourself to create the Umbra character, it was only a suggestion. You don’t have to try and please everyone, always write how you would enjoy it.
Well done with the chapter. By the way you don’t have to force yourself to create the Umbra character, it was only a suggestion. You don’t have to try and please everyone, always write how you would enjoy it.
5/7/2020 c3 Someone
An interesting twist to things. Not even sleep is safe, well done with the chapter and thanks for including my suggestion.
That said what would you think about having a character that is similar to Umbra from warframe? They could be a failed chimera that promestein created and might hunt or protect Ahria. The thought of a character that lost their mind but still has so much willpower to resist being controlled is quite appealing to me.
An interesting twist to things. Not even sleep is safe, well done with the chapter and thanks for including my suggestion.
That said what would you think about having a character that is similar to Umbra from warframe? They could be a failed chimera that promestein created and might hunt or protect Ahria. The thought of a character that lost their mind but still has so much willpower to resist being controlled is quite appealing to me.