11h c22 SamTheSlytherin42
Why even offer a perk as overpowered as “perk point everytime you kill soemthing” if you never planned on letting Percy have it
Why even offer a perk as overpowered as “perk point everytime you kill soemthing” if you never planned on letting Percy have it
10/24 c2 Guest
I can just imagine the words we are the champions dun nun nun like in bouncing voice.
I can just imagine the words we are the champions dun nun nun like in bouncing voice.
10/21 c6 majikss
the gods axt way to much like humans in this story, they are completely just ocs at this poijy. you didnt even try and make them seem like olympians
the gods axt way to much like humans in this story, they are completely just ocs at this poijy. you didnt even try and make them seem like olympians
10/19 c76 x
why does it say it updated when it didn't?
why does it say it updated when it didn't?
10/21 c75 AssiriosDM
Wtf happened with the comments? I made one when the chapter was released and it still didn’t appear it, nor is it appearing any comment that should have appeared after the new chapter...
Wtf happened with the comments? I made one when the chapter was released and it still didn’t appear it, nor is it appearing any comment that should have appeared after the new chapter...
10/21 c76 AssiriosDM
Thanks for the chapter!
I'm a little confused about the pairing in this fic, is this a Percy/Artemis fic or a Harem one? I wouldn't care either way, but it would be nice to know.
Thanks for the chapter!
I'm a little confused about the pairing in this fic, is this a Percy/Artemis fic or a Harem one? I wouldn't care either way, but it would be nice to know.
10/13 c63 hi
the idea of yin and yang is that there is black in the white and white in the black. Not everything is how it seems. I love your story, but for me this was slightly jarring in how you displayed them.
the idea of yin and yang is that there is black in the white and white in the black. Not everything is how it seems. I love your story, but for me this was slightly jarring in how you displayed them.
9/24 c19 Cat Sage
Don't particularly agree with 12 year old percy suddenly being married like this. It makes the pairing feel forced despite the soft transition you're going for so far. Not a huge fan of the extent of the accelerated maturation so far. Both combined feels like you're cramming him into a hole you dug instead of letting his character run a bit more wild. Takes away from the baseline "origimal Percy's" personality a bit too abruptly. Part of that might be the addition of the pacing and writing style mixed in so far, and I can see some improvement as I read despite the numerous revisions and/or edits. Not great, but hasnt turned me away yet. Lets see how you take this further. At chapter 19 so far.
Don't particularly agree with 12 year old percy suddenly being married like this. It makes the pairing feel forced despite the soft transition you're going for so far. Not a huge fan of the extent of the accelerated maturation so far. Both combined feels like you're cramming him into a hole you dug instead of letting his character run a bit more wild. Takes away from the baseline "origimal Percy's" personality a bit too abruptly. Part of that might be the addition of the pacing and writing style mixed in so far, and I can see some improvement as I read despite the numerous revisions and/or edits. Not great, but hasnt turned me away yet. Lets see how you take this further. At chapter 19 so far.
9/24 c1 billsazguard
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story The Flip of a Coin (TFOAC) and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
Heyya buddy, I hope you are doing good,
I just read your story The Flip of a Coin (TFOAC) and I loved it! I'm thinking about adapting it into my comic style and would be super excited to do so, and it will be a commission work, I think you'll really like the results, and maybe you'll even want to share it. by the way, I'm a digital artist open for commissions. I do all sorts of artwork and have some spots available. My rates are fair, and I always deliver high-quality work. If you're interested, let's talk more on Discord_
My Discord: yushishigawa
Hope to hear from you soon
9/21 c11 Guest
Exponentially increasing something is dangerous, because training 8 hours a day will result in 81 hours trained, then the experience equal to 82 trained, then 83, up to 87 on the last day of the week. This results in the equivalent of training for over two million hours, or over 273 years of nonstop training.
Exponentially increasing something is dangerous, because training 8 hours a day will result in 81 hours trained, then the experience equal to 82 trained, then 83, up to 87 on the last day of the week. This results in the equivalent of training for over two million hours, or over 273 years of nonstop training.
9/22 c79 McRaider2525
Finally caught up! Loved it all and in excited to see what happens. My favorite pairing is just like my favorite skyrim build… i always wanna try something new, but every time I have to root for some Pertemis.
Great writing and keep it up!
Finally caught up! Loved it all and in excited to see what happens. My favorite pairing is just like my favorite skyrim build… i always wanna try something new, but every time I have to root for some Pertemis.
Great writing and keep it up!
9/19 c52 Guest
Fyi
Fyi
9/20 c62 McRaider2525
Oh man, I have been invested in this story for a few days now, absolutely binging it the writinng is so good. I wasnt the biggest fan of the MJ pairing, but even still her death was a shock, and that last goodbye was so, so, so emotional. I damn near cried at three AM because of it. Anyways, now that im catching up i cant wait to join everyone else in waiting for these updates. Keep up the amazing writing!
Oh man, I have been invested in this story for a few days now, absolutely binging it the writinng is so good. I wasnt the biggest fan of the MJ pairing, but even still her death was a shock, and that last goodbye was so, so, so emotional. I damn near cried at three AM because of it. Anyways, now that im catching up i cant wait to join everyone else in waiting for these updates. Keep up the amazing writing!