for If not for Umbridge5/21/2022 c35 Azentra
Oh my goodness...
After finding this story in a review on another fic, I have devoured the entire thing in the last... 48 hours? Needless to say, I absolutely fucking love it.
From the very start until the end of part one it felt so natural and great with the way you set up your characters and their personalities. Daphne and Harry are just amazing together, and their friendship slowly growing into more while they discuss their past and pain, but also just have fun together, absolutely amazing. Then her mother and the complications there, and then that ending with the mind torture and the discovery of the horcrux (fuck you Dumbledore btw). The sheer pain and terror Daphne is feeling at that moment was so clear and beautifully written, absolutely amazing, even though it hurt so much to then we get to part to and everything immediately goes into bat shit crazy mode. The chaos of the war fully starting, the horcrux hunt truly beginning, Harry being told the truth and bring very much in pain, the meeting the mother in law, the beautiful moment when Harry and Daphne see each other again outside the hospital, perfection.
And then it ends with his birthday. Absolutely amazing how you did that and I loved every second of it, but then that ending with her asking if she could stay over, while being so embarrassed and nervous about even asking it. That was so sweet and so cute, and it was the best way to catch up to this story.
All in all, thank you for this amazing story, and I certainly hope to see more of it popping up in my notifications soon!
Greetings,
Azentra
Oh my goodness...
After finding this story in a review on another fic, I have devoured the entire thing in the last... 48 hours? Needless to say, I absolutely fucking love it.
From the very start until the end of part one it felt so natural and great with the way you set up your characters and their personalities. Daphne and Harry are just amazing together, and their friendship slowly growing into more while they discuss their past and pain, but also just have fun together, absolutely amazing. Then her mother and the complications there, and then that ending with the mind torture and the discovery of the horcrux (fuck you Dumbledore btw). The sheer pain and terror Daphne is feeling at that moment was so clear and beautifully written, absolutely amazing, even though it hurt so much to then we get to part to and everything immediately goes into bat shit crazy mode. The chaos of the war fully starting, the horcrux hunt truly beginning, Harry being told the truth and bring very much in pain, the meeting the mother in law, the beautiful moment when Harry and Daphne see each other again outside the hospital, perfection.
And then it ends with his birthday. Absolutely amazing how you did that and I loved every second of it, but then that ending with her asking if she could stay over, while being so embarrassed and nervous about even asking it. That was so sweet and so cute, and it was the best way to catch up to this story.
All in all, thank you for this amazing story, and I certainly hope to see more of it popping up in my notifications soon!
Greetings,
Azentra
5/15/2022 c35 Richard Smith
Excellent, Keep up the good work
Excellent, Keep up the good work
5/12/2022 c15 AraelDranoth
You mentioned Halo... Right. As soon as I get home from work and log in to FF I am favouriting this fic.
You mentioned Halo... Right. As soon as I get home from work and log in to FF I am favouriting this fic.
5/11/2022 c5 AraelDranoth
Another fantastic chapter to read. Keep up the amazing work!
Another fantastic chapter to read. Keep up the amazing work!
5/11/2022 c1 AraelDranoth
An excellently written first chapter. Too lazy to log in :)
An excellently written first chapter. Too lazy to log in :)
4/27/2022 c21 
5The Durdens Wrath
So. Daphne's mum is just her mom. A Greengrass by marriage. How would she have any control of inheritance or household over the blood heir?
5The Durdens WrathSo. Daphne's mum is just her mom. A Greengrass by marriage. How would she have any control of inheritance or household over the blood heir?
4/22/2022 c29 UnseenVision97
I just wanted to say that this story has bee an excellent read and I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes.
I just wanted to say that this story has bee an excellent read and I’m looking forward to seeing where it goes.
4/19/2022 c35 10Akamoroti
All caught up. And this was a good chapter to land on. I’m enjoying the story, especially Sirius taking charge. Looking forward to more.
10AkamorotiAll caught up. And this was a good chapter to land on. I’m enjoying the story, especially Sirius taking charge. Looking forward to more.
4/17/2022 c27 kukuhimanpr
voldemort: AH WEEL DAHSTRAAY YUUU!
that just happened. voldemort become a generic mass effect 1 mercenary enemy that always spam the line "I WILL DESTROY OU!"
voldemort: AH WEEL DAHSTRAAY YUUU!
that just happened. voldemort become a generic mass effect 1 mercenary enemy that always spam the line "I WILL DESTROY OU!"
4/16/2022 c10 kukuhimanpr
lulz at severus borrowing book 1 hermione's line about the worst punishment at hogwarts. ExpElLEd.
lulz at severus borrowing book 1 hermione's line about the worst punishment at hogwarts. ExpElLEd.
4/16/2022 c3 kukuhimanpr
its like daphne sat on another continent alone when everyone's gaze switch from harry to her.
its like daphne sat on another continent alone when everyone's gaze switch from harry to her.
4/13/2022 c35 Guest
What a wonderful fic, can’t wait for more!
What a wonderful fic, can’t wait for more!
4/12/2022 c25 Guest
Voldemort wouldnt give a shit about Daphne. Don't make this a sue fic.
Voldemort wouldnt give a shit about Daphne. Don't make this a sue fic.
4/11/2022 c35 10CaskettFan5
What a nice chapter, filled with so many different emotions. I was wondering exactly what would be involved with her 'staying' but it was on the mild end of the possibilities but still touching.
10CaskettFan5What a nice chapter, filled with so many different emotions. I was wondering exactly what would be involved with her 'staying' but it was on the mild end of the possibilities but still touching.