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3/18/2021 c3 Glacier H
Nice! You're writing is very nice. That's also a good cliffhanger but i think it's Dimentio.
6/9/2020 c3 86StarlitDuck
This chapter was short, buy very well done. I liked the way that you characterized Timpani here. I also liked the cliffhanger at the end. Well done.
4/30/2020 c2 StarlitDuck
I find it interesting how the Void incident has been erased from people's memories. Timpani especially seems to be an...interesting choice to have removed the memories from.

This was a really good chapter. The only thing I would suggest is to work on your tenses. Sometimes you wrote in the past tense, other times in the present tense. I would suggest keeping it in the past tense to avoid confusion.

Anyway, good job on this!
4/28/2020 c1 StarlitDuck
Ooh, I like this. It focuses more on the description than anything else, which is very nice. I also like the sense of mystery here; that last line in particular just makes one wonder, you know? I think this is a very good start, especially for your first fanfic. Good job :)

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