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7/21/2020 c3 Guest
Oh, I enjoyed that very much. Thanks
5/6/2020 c3 Eeks
Sweet baby Jesus, your writing is terrible; your characters are one dimensional and your plot is predictable. May the lord have mercy on you and provide you with a path to becoming a better writer. Amen.
5/8/2020 c3 10SapphireBlue2007
I have a question, though. Why is the WORLD would Charlie get Bella to give Jacob a second chance?! I mean, he is a disgusting creature in this fic!
5/8/2020 c2 SapphireBlue2007
Waiting in the shadows for the right time, were you Edward?
5/8/2020 c1 SapphireBlue2007
Seriously?! I can't decide between kicking him and punching him!
5/6/2020 c3 joshuasmom131
Ty for the story! I love that rose called the dog pound on Jacob lol
5/6/2020 c2 joshuasmom131
I hope the smell stays with Jacob forever lol
5/6/2020 c1 joshuasmom131
I just found this story and great first chapter!
5/4/2020 c3 1ChristianMom54
Fun I loved it. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
5/1/2020 c2 Guest
Thank you.. Its great. :)
5/1/2020 c2 sarahplumb
YES PLEASE …...A.S.A.P IM NOT GREEDY REALLY LOL
5/1/2020 c1 Itsme123
Of couse i want to see what happens to the dog :-) thanks for writing :-)
5/1/2020 c1 sarahplumb
YES PLEASE … A.S.A.P please x
5/1/2020 c1 Guest
But what exactly did he do? Caught cheating? With another woman? Man? Having an orgy? What?
And who was the creep to watch and took the photos? Or was Jake set up by his jealous lover?
5/2/2020 c3 Readaholic187
Seems like part of the story is missing. Why did Charlie want Bella to get back with Jacob? Why did Charlie not care that Bella had no romantic feelings for Jacob? If Jacob thought that Bella was such a dreadful girlfriend, why did he want to marry her? I hope that you will provide one more chapter that will answer these questions. Thanks.
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