
10/17/2022 c8 lartessier44
A brilluant story and a real cliffy at the endI eagerly await your next chapter dear suthor.
A brilluant story and a real cliffy at the endI eagerly await your next chapter dear suthor.
10/25/2021 c8 Firedawg
A great story that has my attention, Harry's performance in the wizeng was superb as is the relationship with Daphne. Looking forward to more, Thanks for writing..
A great story that has my attention, Harry's performance in the wizeng was superb as is the relationship with Daphne. Looking forward to more, Thanks for writing..
5/26/2021 c8 EagleHasLanded
Fun chapter, nice to see their relationship progress. Be nice to see their alliance somehow get the pink toad out of the castle (personally, my least favorite character in the books). But what a surprise cliffhanger to end it on!
Fun chapter, nice to see their relationship progress. Be nice to see their alliance somehow get the pink toad out of the castle (personally, my least favorite character in the books). But what a surprise cliffhanger to end it on!
5/22/2021 c8
6DriftWood1965
Nice Cliffhanger. Enjoyable story so far, though obviously there are some serious timeline issues compared to Canon (Neville and the rest, except Harry, didn't learn the Patronus until the 5th year so how were they used during the Dementor attack on the train...etc)

Nice Cliffhanger. Enjoyable story so far, though obviously there are some serious timeline issues compared to Canon (Neville and the rest, except Harry, didn't learn the Patronus until the 5th year so how were they used during the Dementor attack on the train...etc)
5/21/2021 c8
9CaskettFan5
A cliffhanger, seriously? You interrupted their kiss on top of that! I like this story overall. I just think you got a little carried away with the lordships and they've been a little too absent-minded about the contract. Otherwise, this has been a good dose of Haphne, thank you.

A cliffhanger, seriously? You interrupted their kiss on top of that! I like this story overall. I just think you got a little carried away with the lordships and they've been a little too absent-minded about the contract. Otherwise, this has been a good dose of Haphne, thank you.