for The Next Great Adventure12/30/2024 c6 Mutant Ascension
Seriously why are there still stories being written with this stupid cliche nonsensical c*** about muggles being able to defeat wizards why is it still at debate it? I'm sure that hurts your Pride as a model but unfortunately for you muggle weaponry cannot beat Magic how the hell do you expect it to literally Magic to get a bill to alter reality itself and you think that putting some scrap metal together and chemical reactions would allow us to win even our greatest weapon nuclear weapons would not work perhaps the first 1 or 2 times it might work. But contrary to the stupid cliched fan fiction that I'm sure many people on here have right wizards are not stupid once they realize the dangers of nuclear weapons that's assuming they already don't because I'm pretty sure they do because in the books it's pretty clear that some magical governments do in fact interact with their muggle counterparts and considering that the statue of secrecy exists to separate the 2 worlds I'm quite sure that not all magical governments around the world are as dumb as fudge was and are in fact aware of muggle weapons. Anyway back to the point once they realized the dangers of nuclear weapons it's not difficult for them to find networks at muggles have 0 defense against Magic they Can't Stop wizards from entering their facilities they Can't Stop wizards from I Don't Know the atomizing every single nuclear weapons in fact extremely easy for them to Do That. Once again even if they didn't you seem to forget that nukes still have to hit the freaking ground in order to do any damage and wizards in which it would in fact see it coming a simple transfiguration spell done upon that nuclear bomb would turn it into a pebble or drop of water problem solved. Never mind the fact that for Wizards to destroy the mugger world is in fact extremely easy it literally only requires them to teleport into muggle cities around the world and on leash fiend fire there is no way muggles can extinguish clean fire then there is the fact that the fiend far itself has a mind of its own and will spread and grow as it Burns more and more so one withered unleashed and fire in a local city would result in the entire city being destroyed and just like that in a single day every single muggle city and village across the planet could be destroyed it's that easy for wither than witches to win against mothers. I swear I never understand why it is that fanfiction writers always latch on to the most stupid s logic and cliche's to run with never ones that make any sense the The more idiotic the belief the more you guys spreading it that doesn't even make sense to me but I guess people are stupid in general so it doesn't make sense in a way.
Seriously why are there still stories being written with this stupid cliche nonsensical c*** about muggles being able to defeat wizards why is it still at debate it? I'm sure that hurts your Pride as a model but unfortunately for you muggle weaponry cannot beat Magic how the hell do you expect it to literally Magic to get a bill to alter reality itself and you think that putting some scrap metal together and chemical reactions would allow us to win even our greatest weapon nuclear weapons would not work perhaps the first 1 or 2 times it might work. But contrary to the stupid cliched fan fiction that I'm sure many people on here have right wizards are not stupid once they realize the dangers of nuclear weapons that's assuming they already don't because I'm pretty sure they do because in the books it's pretty clear that some magical governments do in fact interact with their muggle counterparts and considering that the statue of secrecy exists to separate the 2 worlds I'm quite sure that not all magical governments around the world are as dumb as fudge was and are in fact aware of muggle weapons. Anyway back to the point once they realized the dangers of nuclear weapons it's not difficult for them to find networks at muggles have 0 defense against Magic they Can't Stop wizards from entering their facilities they Can't Stop wizards from I Don't Know the atomizing every single nuclear weapons in fact extremely easy for them to Do That. Once again even if they didn't you seem to forget that nukes still have to hit the freaking ground in order to do any damage and wizards in which it would in fact see it coming a simple transfiguration spell done upon that nuclear bomb would turn it into a pebble or drop of water problem solved. Never mind the fact that for Wizards to destroy the mugger world is in fact extremely easy it literally only requires them to teleport into muggle cities around the world and on leash fiend fire there is no way muggles can extinguish clean fire then there is the fact that the fiend far itself has a mind of its own and will spread and grow as it Burns more and more so one withered unleashed and fire in a local city would result in the entire city being destroyed and just like that in a single day every single muggle city and village across the planet could be destroyed it's that easy for wither than witches to win against mothers. I swear I never understand why it is that fanfiction writers always latch on to the most stupid s logic and cliche's to run with never ones that make any sense the The more idiotic the belief the more you guys spreading it that doesn't even make sense to me but I guess people are stupid in general so it doesn't make sense in a way.
8/5/2024 c1 Guest
Utekar’s fics are entirely AI
That’s why
Utekar’s fics are entirely AI
That’s why
8/21/2021 c8 Mss
I don’t think I’ll finish reading this even if you update it. It’s a good original idea, but not necessarily my cup of tea.
I feel like this whole endeavor is pointless. If he had been Harry Potter he could have potentially cast the killing curse. Sure they could have tried to block it but you need to actually use something physical to do so in HP so imagine it would be the same in Inheritance Cycle.
Also, what is the point of having MC help if he’s just going to be caught? The whole thing was honestly really stupid. He tells the Dwarves are stupid for the actions they take but he did exactly the same thing. Not only is his family put at risk but his future as well.
I mean at least they don’t know he’s a dragon yet but now his existence is known…
Also I’m not really enjoying the character development. Kinda wish you would have just done a time skip. Maybe had him help Brom rescue the Dragon eggs from the king.
The forsworn are still alive but I’m pretty sure in canon most of them where almost all dead by the time Brom’s Dragon was killed, but I could be wrong it’s been awhile since I’ve read the books or even looked at IC’s timeline.
Honestly it would have been neater if Harry had actually just gotten a dragon companion then actually becoming a dragon.
I don’t think I’ll finish reading this even if you update it. It’s a good original idea, but not necessarily my cup of tea.
I feel like this whole endeavor is pointless. If he had been Harry Potter he could have potentially cast the killing curse. Sure they could have tried to block it but you need to actually use something physical to do so in HP so imagine it would be the same in Inheritance Cycle.
Also, what is the point of having MC help if he’s just going to be caught? The whole thing was honestly really stupid. He tells the Dwarves are stupid for the actions they take but he did exactly the same thing. Not only is his family put at risk but his future as well.
I mean at least they don’t know he’s a dragon yet but now his existence is known…
Also I’m not really enjoying the character development. Kinda wish you would have just done a time skip. Maybe had him help Brom rescue the Dragon eggs from the king.
The forsworn are still alive but I’m pretty sure in canon most of them where almost all dead by the time Brom’s Dragon was killed, but I could be wrong it’s been awhile since I’ve read the books or even looked at IC’s timeline.
Honestly it would have been neater if Harry had actually just gotten a dragon companion then actually becoming a dragon.
6/5/2021 c8 
9K. M. Donovan
whelp, that just confirmed my previous statement. you have changed harry too much. he is no longer Harry potter, but an original character. thus this is not a harry centric crossover but an OC centric crossover.
for it to be a Harry potter fic, you need the main character to be HARRY POTTER. that means name and memories intact. the moment you rebirth him in a new land with a new name and new memories? he ceases to be Harry potter and becomes an Original character.
so good luck with your fic, but I came here to read about harry potter in Alagaesia, not about an original character who USED to be harry potter.
thats the biggest issue here. by stripping his memories and experiences? you are also removing his motivations, his goals, his drive. you are removing the very things that MAKE him harry Potter. without those? he is no longer harry potter.
so you have failed in your goal. for this to be Harry potter in a new world? he needs to remain HARRY BLOODY POTTER.
9K. M. Donovanwhelp, that just confirmed my previous statement. you have changed harry too much. he is no longer Harry potter, but an original character. thus this is not a harry centric crossover but an OC centric crossover.
for it to be a Harry potter fic, you need the main character to be HARRY POTTER. that means name and memories intact. the moment you rebirth him in a new land with a new name and new memories? he ceases to be Harry potter and becomes an Original character.
so good luck with your fic, but I came here to read about harry potter in Alagaesia, not about an original character who USED to be harry potter.
thats the biggest issue here. by stripping his memories and experiences? you are also removing his motivations, his goals, his drive. you are removing the very things that MAKE him harry Potter. without those? he is no longer harry potter.
so you have failed in your goal. for this to be Harry potter in a new world? he needs to remain HARRY BLOODY POTTER.
6/5/2021 c2 K. M. Donovan
not sure I can call this a harry potter story. thus far other then the prologue, there is nothing here that is HARRY. you have de-aged him to infancy, and changed his name. until I see he has his memories of the past? this is not a harry potter story, but an OC-centric eragon fic with minor Harry potter elements.
for this character to be Harry, then he needs to be HARRY, and thus far I am not seeing that.
so for now I am reserving judgement.
also, speech should be bracketed with "Speech" not 'Speech'. the double quotation marks are what is usually used to denote verbal speech. the single marks are usually used for thoughts, like a character giving an internal monologue. for mental conversations? usually Italics are used.
I point this out because you use of single quotation marks instead of the doubles? actually makes this hard to read. because my mind is rebelling against this butchering of everything I learned in my English creative writing courses.
not sure I can call this a harry potter story. thus far other then the prologue, there is nothing here that is HARRY. you have de-aged him to infancy, and changed his name. until I see he has his memories of the past? this is not a harry potter story, but an OC-centric eragon fic with minor Harry potter elements.
for this character to be Harry, then he needs to be HARRY, and thus far I am not seeing that.
so for now I am reserving judgement.
also, speech should be bracketed with "Speech" not 'Speech'. the double quotation marks are what is usually used to denote verbal speech. the single marks are usually used for thoughts, like a character giving an internal monologue. for mental conversations? usually Italics are used.
I point this out because you use of single quotation marks instead of the doubles? actually makes this hard to read. because my mind is rebelling against this butchering of everything I learned in my English creative writing courses.
3/21/2021 c8 kronos797
im a bit confused, when feanor is a dragon does he speak mentally like other dragons or verbally. that's something else i wanted to ask, can you use "speaking" for speaking and 'thought' for thoughts and telepathy, or something similar. just to differentiate between the two. alagesian dragons cant speak but are telepathic whereas the opposite is true for lotr dragons.
im a bit confused, when feanor is a dragon does he speak mentally like other dragons or verbally. that's something else i wanted to ask, can you use "speaking" for speaking and 'thought' for thoughts and telepathy, or something similar. just to differentiate between the two. alagesian dragons cant speak but are telepathic whereas the opposite is true for lotr dragons.
3/21/2021 c6 kronos797
i'd say change the spelling to faenor. he is quite fae to even the elves(fae being otherworldly and strange in this instance). he would be for the lotr elves as well.
i'd say change the spelling to faenor. he is quite fae to even the elves(fae being otherworldly and strange in this instance). he would be for the lotr elves as well.
1/31/2021 c8 outcome 5
I hope you have not abandoned your story since there are not many of eragon and it would be a shame if you abandoned it I was fascinated by the crossover of harry potter and Eragon please update soon
I hope you have not abandoned your story since there are not many of eragon and it would be a shame if you abandoned it I was fascinated by the crossover of harry potter and Eragon please update soon