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10/22/2020 c7 1ArchAngel319
Page 170-171 inheritance cycle "Eldest". Guntera, Dwarf king of gods, warrior and scholar, formed Alagasia from bones of a giant, born fully formed from a she wolf at dawn of stars, husband to Goddess of rivers. created elves.
Kilf, Dwarf goddess of rivers and sea, mate of Guntera.
Urur, Dwarf god of air and heavens, brother of morgothal
morgothal, dwarf god of fire, with urur created dragons
Sindri, dwarf goddess and mother of earth, created humans
Helzvog, god, creator of dwarves

Thats all the dwarven god lore I could get from the books. Hope it help, good luck with your next chapter.
10/22/2020 c7 Coolhunter
List of dwarf gods for the inheritance series that I looked up
Gûntera, King of the deities. He was the husband of the goddess Kílf. The dwarves made sacrifices to him in order to ensure his favor. Gûntera was against the creation of people to inhabit Alagaësia: later on, though, after Helzvog defied his order and created the dwarves, Gûntera created the elves.

Helzvog, god of stone. He was most beloved of the dwarves. Helzvog created the dwarf from stone.

Kílf, goddess of water. She was the mate of Gûntera and was the only one who restrained herself from forming a race. The dwarves associate her with water lilies and coral. She was described as having flowing hair and merry eyes.

Morgothal, god of fire. He was brother to Urûr and he and his brother created the dragon. In the third book, Brisingr, Eragon had met a dwarven deity, which was then revealed to be Gûntera. Speculation before the book's release was that Morgothal would be the one Eragon met because he is the god of fire, brisingr. Dwarves believe that honored dwarf warriors dine in Morgothal's Hall when they die.

Sindri, goddess of the earth. She created humans from the earth.

Urûr, god of the heavens and the air, brother to Morgothal and the creator of the dragons. According to the dwarven priest Gannel, no one of the two brothers can live without each other.
10/22/2020 c7 2Thundramon
You should check out inheriwiki. I read the books but it was a long time back. This link should be helpful -

wiki / The_Dwarven_Deities
10/17/2020 c6 A Guest
Don't change the name, Fëanor is fine. If a LOTR crossover happens, this can be used as a good way to confuse enemies, or something funny (like that episode of CSI where there was a John the Black that was white and John the White that was a Black person). Also, it's not as if in both the real world and LOTR two people can't have the same name (think about Ecthelion, first the gondolindrim elf, then two Stewards of Gondor; Arathorn, two Dunedain chieftains), or someone can't have two or more names (Elu the elf, also known as Thingol and Ëlwe, Elessar also known as Aragorn II) or nicknames (Mairon - Sauron, Melkor - Morgoth, Olórin -Mithrandir/Gandalf/Incánus/Tharkûn/, Aragorn -Strider), etc.

To sum it up, you don't need to change his name, even if you were forced to discern between two people named the same, you can always add a nickname or something.
10/17/2020 c6 Hadrian.Caeser
I wonder how you will include the house elves. Maybe a children of his family's Bannermen?
10/17/2020 c5 Hadrian.Caeser
Love it
10/17/2020 c6 1ArchAngel319
Ha! That last sentence just blew my mind. Out of every ally to be sent to Feanor I did not expect the house elves to be counted among them. Thanks again P-B for another great chapter. I don't think you should change Feanor's name just because it's a Tolkien reference. If you do an eventual LOTR crossover in the future I'm sure you can figure some way around the Feanor name issue. Mabey, If Feanor gets transported to the LOTR universe for your crossover you can have him regain is Harry potter memories and he will just refer to himself as Harry there. IDK, I'm sure things will get figured out. Anyway, good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
10/17/2020 c6 2Thundramon
I like the name Feanor and I think if a crossover element occurs, having another immortal elf of the same name would be perfectly fine, sort of like a namesake. It would also make crossover far more believable if there was some ancient history between the two realms.

And OMG Dobby is following Harry to the new world, I really don't want any other HP characters to show up though but it is your call as a writer. So please do whatever it takes to make the story move according to your plans.

Thanks again for the new chapter
10/16/2020 c5 whitedorumon
This is great, really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait for more chapters so please continue to provide me and the nearly 200 others who are following with more imagination fuel ;-P
10/14/2020 c5 Guest
Good story have you ever thought of pairing Harry with Eragon? hope you update
10/14/2020 c2 RandoFox
I think Arya would be a good choice for Harry and I don't mind you adding Hedwig into the story if that's what you mean but I would rather you not add any other human characters from HP, so that's my thoughts on the matter. I enjoyed the first chapter, can't wait to read more
10/12/2020 c5 A Guest
First, this is proof that I have read this chapter, giving you support. Hope your ideas don't run dry :)

Second, will the dwarves be a bit offended about working with the riders of old? Or maybe surprised about the born anew as brothers of Fëanor part?

Third, oh Brom and Fëanor are going to be so scolded by Fëanor's mum!
10/12/2020 c5 NecrorexSparda Juubi-No-Kishin
While I don't recommend bringing Harry potter characters, how bout creatures? Like a pet basalisk for Harry? Ect.
10/12/2020 c5 1ArchAngel319
Thanks P-B for another awesome chapter so soon. I got to say I didn't see this plot twist with Anhuin coming. Love the idea though, it just the right amount of cannon divergence to spice up the story and keep us wondering what other changes Feanor will do to the cannon story of Alagasia. I'm excited to see what other A.U. changes you make to this Inheritance cycle story. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
10/10/2020 c1 Otsutsuki Naruto
I'm sorry, but I couldn't read the story because of the stone wall of text.
When someone speak, especially different people. Try to use space between each person.

I'm sure that this is a wonderful story but try to make it easier on the eyes. Ty
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