for The Next Great Adventure10/12/2020 c5 
1ArchAngel319
Thanks P-B for another awesome chapter so soon. I got to say I didn't see this plot twist with Anhuin coming. Love the idea though, it just the right amount of cannon divergence to spice up the story and keep us wondering what other changes Feanor will do to the cannon story of Alagasia. I'm excited to see what other A.U. changes you make to this Inheritance cycle story. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
1ArchAngel319Thanks P-B for another awesome chapter so soon. I got to say I didn't see this plot twist with Anhuin coming. Love the idea though, it just the right amount of cannon divergence to spice up the story and keep us wondering what other changes Feanor will do to the cannon story of Alagasia. I'm excited to see what other A.U. changes you make to this Inheritance cycle story. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
10/10/2020 c1 Otsutsuki Naruto
I'm sorry, but I couldn't read the story because of the stone wall of text.
When someone speak, especially different people. Try to use space between each person.
I'm sure that this is a wonderful story but try to make it easier on the eyes. Ty
I'm sorry, but I couldn't read the story because of the stone wall of text.
When someone speak, especially different people. Try to use space between each person.
I'm sure that this is a wonderful story but try to make it easier on the eyes. Ty
10/11/2020 c5 2Thundramon
Feanor is a great character and his moments of growth this chapter are allowing some of Harry's characteristics to shine through but Feanor still seems a lot like an OC, this is supposed to be Harry Potter reborn into another world so I am hoping some of Harry shine through like his previous life's memories.
Otherwise I am genuinely enjoying this fic, Thank you for the awesome consecutive updates. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
2ThundramonFeanor is a great character and his moments of growth this chapter are allowing some of Harry's characteristics to shine through but Feanor still seems a lot like an OC, this is supposed to be Harry Potter reborn into another world so I am hoping some of Harry shine through like his previous life's memories.
Otherwise I am genuinely enjoying this fic, Thank you for the awesome consecutive updates. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
10/10/2020 c4 1ArchAngel319
Thanks again P-D for another awesome chapter. I loved every little thing about this chapter and can't think of any criticism that would help make it better. I'm really excited to see where this story is going and I don't think I've ever read a Inheritance cycle fanfiction where the main protagonist helps Brom hunt down the Forsaken. I'm really excited to see how this idea and ark of the story plays out. I'm also curious if your going to have Harry/feanor romance Saphira later in the story or Aria. If you do any romance/fluff later in the story that is. Anyway, best wishes and hopes towards your grandfathers heath and I wish you the best of luck with your next chapter. As always, have fun writing.
1ArchAngel319Thanks again P-D for another awesome chapter. I loved every little thing about this chapter and can't think of any criticism that would help make it better. I'm really excited to see where this story is going and I don't think I've ever read a Inheritance cycle fanfiction where the main protagonist helps Brom hunt down the Forsaken. I'm really excited to see how this idea and ark of the story plays out. I'm also curious if your going to have Harry/feanor romance Saphira later in the story or Aria. If you do any romance/fluff later in the story that is. Anyway, best wishes and hopes towards your grandfathers heath and I wish you the best of luck with your next chapter. As always, have fun writing.
10/9/2020 c4 3apocalyps24
I believe the visible part of algaesia is about the size of the continental north America but I may be wrong
3apocalyps24I believe the visible part of algaesia is about the size of the continental north America but I may be wrong
10/9/2020 c2 kronos797
you know it took a while for it to click but did you get feanor from lotr. as in faenor the greatest elf to ever live.
you know it took a while for it to click but did you get feanor from lotr. as in faenor the greatest elf to ever live.
10/9/2020 c4 3Nariem
Great story, though werent Forsworn and their dragons names erased from existence by magic?
3NariemGreat story, though werent Forsworn and their dragons names erased from existence by magic?
9/24/2020 c3 3Pinkypi
I LOVE it, I kept asking myself after the change would he choose a partner now in terms of dragon and rider and if he did who would he choose cuz the only option that pops into mind is Arya. The growing pain here is I feel like both being bonded and unbonded would have amazing potential. His magic has done some amazing things so far so being able to bond after the fact should be easily doable.
3PinkypiI LOVE it, I kept asking myself after the change would he choose a partner now in terms of dragon and rider and if he did who would he choose cuz the only option that pops into mind is Arya. The growing pain here is I feel like both being bonded and unbonded would have amazing potential. His magic has done some amazing things so far so being able to bond after the fact should be easily doable.
9/21/2020 c2 kronos797
hedwig should obviously be his dragon. Harry's in eragon he needs a dragon, might as well be hedwig. i think the pairing should be arya.
hedwig should obviously be his dragon. Harry's in eragon he needs a dragon, might as well be hedwig. i think the pairing should be arya.
9/15/2020 c2 Kryn Womble
Oh I jumped the gun way too fast, Harry is a baby...I thought he was dropping in as a full grown adult.
Oh I jumped the gun way too fast, Harry is a baby...I thought he was dropping in as a full grown adult.