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7/10/2020 c1 ddsurvivor
Interesting, First Fan fic I found that actually used the death scene conversation between Dumbledore and Harry as a change in the plot. Good intro on how Harry will be in the Inheritance cycle. Also liked the way you introduced and integrated Harry (Feanor) into the Elves society.

Arya Love interest? they are only what 2-3 years apart.
Oder sister maybe?

Hopefully your on Haitus. would like to see where this fan fic goes.
6/20/2020 c1 Hadrian.Caeser
Love the start
5/20/2020 c1 Guest
Great start.
5/19/2020 c1 a.bonetti92
wow... this story looks like very good!
5/2/2020 c1 GUEST
Whoah: FĂ«anor? With that name, we can expect a lot of things to come. Please continue this story.
5/4/2020 c1 Daphne is our Queen
Amazing start - Love the premise
5/2/2020 c1 4Yu-Gi-Oh 5D's Master
Interesting, I like see how this story develops.
5/2/2020 c1 Ellaxarion
Interesting story. Needs polish, I agree with your need for a proofreader/beta. Can't volunteer myself due to preparing for an exam(indefinitely postponed, but still pivotal). I would recommend using the grammar correction facility available with Word or something similar. Wish you the best of luck! Stay safe!
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