for The Next Great Adventure8/10/2020 c2 Hadrian.Caeser
Love it. I think that this is the first time that I have read a story about the ancient history of the elves in inheritance circle
Love it. I think that this is the first time that I have read a story about the ancient history of the elves in inheritance circle
8/6/2020 c1 
3jiubantai-taicho
Ok interesting concept and I hope to see more also I hope Harry gets a fast relationship with Arya maybe taking Faölins place in her heart and actually staying with her maybe if possible have a harem lol but if not just being with Arya. Perhaps he hatched a Dragon maybe Saphira or perhaps he just finds a secret egg a wild dragon that wouldn’t have hatched or perhaps a hidden or forgotten egg from before the fall that would have died without finding his/her rider(we know this could have happened to the eggs in the vault) anyway I hope to see what will happen.
3jiubantai-taichoOk interesting concept and I hope to see more also I hope Harry gets a fast relationship with Arya maybe taking Faölins place in her heart and actually staying with her maybe if possible have a harem lol but if not just being with Arya. Perhaps he hatched a Dragon maybe Saphira or perhaps he just finds a secret egg a wild dragon that wouldn’t have hatched or perhaps a hidden or forgotten egg from before the fall that would have died without finding his/her rider(we know this could have happened to the eggs in the vault) anyway I hope to see what will happen.
7/10/2020 c1 ddsurvivor
Interesting, First Fan fic I found that actually used the death scene conversation between Dumbledore and Harry as a change in the plot. Good intro on how Harry will be in the Inheritance cycle. Also liked the way you introduced and integrated Harry (Feanor) into the Elves society.
Arya Love interest? they are only what 2-3 years apart.
Oder sister maybe?
Hopefully your on Haitus. would like to see where this fan fic goes.
Interesting, First Fan fic I found that actually used the death scene conversation between Dumbledore and Harry as a change in the plot. Good intro on how Harry will be in the Inheritance cycle. Also liked the way you introduced and integrated Harry (Feanor) into the Elves society.
Arya Love interest? they are only what 2-3 years apart.
Oder sister maybe?
Hopefully your on Haitus. would like to see where this fan fic goes.
5/20/2020 c1 Guest
Great start.
Great start.
5/2/2020 c1 GUEST
Whoah: Fëanor? With that name, we can expect a lot of things to come. Please continue this story.
Whoah: Fëanor? With that name, we can expect a lot of things to come. Please continue this story.
5/2/2020 c1 Ellaxarion
Interesting story. Needs polish, I agree with your need for a proofreader/beta. Can't volunteer myself due to preparing for an exam(indefinitely postponed, but still pivotal). I would recommend using the grammar correction facility available with Word or something similar. Wish you the best of luck! Stay safe!
Interesting story. Needs polish, I agree with your need for a proofreader/beta. Can't volunteer myself due to preparing for an exam(indefinitely postponed, but still pivotal). I would recommend using the grammar correction facility available with Word or something similar. Wish you the best of luck! Stay safe!