for The First Time Harry Tried to Time Travel4/23 c2 Guest
Eww merope/harry ship ? Eww argh.. I m an orc now from sheer displeasure
Eww merope/harry ship ? Eww argh.. I m an orc now from sheer displeasure
10/10/2024 c3 FlawedBauthor
Did you read this before you posted? Literally nothing happening in this chapter makes sense lmao
Did you read this before you posted? Literally nothing happening in this chapter makes sense lmao
8/22/2024 c16 XiaoYueMao
300-400 years is way too long to avoid incest, 3 generations at most is all that's needed to avoid incest, and that's only because 2nd cousins (shared grandparents, aka one of your parents is cousins with your second cousins parent) sometimes but not always cause issues. but 3rd cousins (shared great grandparent) is completely safe, technically even a first cousin every so often is safe. so 300-400 years is utter overkill, thats nearly 12 generations assuming they arent having kids as 80 yr old every generation
300-400 years is way too long to avoid incest, 3 generations at most is all that's needed to avoid incest, and that's only because 2nd cousins (shared grandparents, aka one of your parents is cousins with your second cousins parent) sometimes but not always cause issues. but 3rd cousins (shared great grandparent) is completely safe, technically even a first cousin every so often is safe. so 300-400 years is utter overkill, thats nearly 12 generations assuming they arent having kids as 80 yr old every generation
5/27/2024 c17 Loyal Friend
Well, this pairing was very unique.
Well, this pairing was very unique.
1/26/2024 c17 paulieandgilbert
I like this story. It's somewhat simplistic to be honest, but it doesn't have to be comparable to War and Peace to be considered 'good reading.'
Great job!
I like this story. It's somewhat simplistic to be honest, but it doesn't have to be comparable to War and Peace to be considered 'good reading.'
Great job!
15/23/2023 c4 guest
Your various fics seem to be set in completely different versions of the HP universe. HP is rightly determined to limit Dumbles's influence. If you write another, you might consider one in which he and Merope go to Ariana's pre-trauma childhood and prevent the attack, which provided an excuse for some of Dumbles's twisty thinking. They could warn the family's father to put up wards to keep unsupervised kids within the property and Muggles outside, and to hide or disguise what happens within.
In yet another, to again prevent the birth of TMR they could rescue small-child-Merope and place her with her maternal relatives, who (as revealed by her name) were Blacks.
It is not unexpected yet still lowering that you too buy into the trope that only beautiful females are worthwhile. Sad.
Your various fics seem to be set in completely different versions of the HP universe. HP is rightly determined to limit Dumbles's influence. If you write another, you might consider one in which he and Merope go to Ariana's pre-trauma childhood and prevent the attack, which provided an excuse for some of Dumbles's twisty thinking. They could warn the family's father to put up wards to keep unsupervised kids within the property and Muggles outside, and to hide or disguise what happens within.
In yet another, to again prevent the birth of TMR they could rescue small-child-Merope and place her with her maternal relatives, who (as revealed by her name) were Blacks.
It is not unexpected yet still lowering that you too buy into the trope that only beautiful females are worthwhile. Sad.
5/23/2023 c1 guest
Well, you've embarked on an analogue of dunuelos's Lone Traveler tales (highly recommended; best read at AO3 so you can avoid the xovers with fandoms that don't interest you *). Should be interesting. I'm too tired to review much but thank you for your efforts, especially since you choose to help Merope, one of the most abused characters in the HP canon.
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* and also ~many~ thanks for separating out your own xovers. I don't know the fandoms you've used so far and will gratefully skip those fics.
Well, you've embarked on an analogue of dunuelos's Lone Traveler tales (highly recommended; best read at AO3 so you can avoid the xovers with fandoms that don't interest you *). Should be interesting. I'm too tired to review much but thank you for your efforts, especially since you choose to help Merope, one of the most abused characters in the HP canon.
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* and also ~many~ thanks for separating out your own xovers. I don't know the fandoms you've used so far and will gratefully skip those fics.
2/5/2023 c9 Guest
Something about her saying she'd be happy enough to just be with harry as long as her mortal life allowed really had an effect on me. It made me sad in a way. But I'm also a sap for the cliche romantic stuff and dialogue ooo lol. I'm glad that they will have eternity together though :*-)
Something about her saying she'd be happy enough to just be with harry as long as her mortal life allowed really had an effect on me. It made me sad in a way. But I'm also a sap for the cliche romantic stuff and dialogue ooo lol. I'm glad that they will have eternity together though :*-)