
9/7/2020 c7 Unsettling-A.I.R
A very whole fic! Glad to have found this little gem. I didn't expect someone to try their hand at a serious cross with Pokemon, well there is Boldores and Broomsticks, but that is more slice of life to me. Also pleasant to see some of the older legendaries have shot at the action, with the Space-Time trio or Arceus being the ones blamed for the action. Hope that this continues and that you have a great time writing it.
Till next time!
Unsettling-A.I.R.
A very whole fic! Glad to have found this little gem. I didn't expect someone to try their hand at a serious cross with Pokemon, well there is Boldores and Broomsticks, but that is more slice of life to me. Also pleasant to see some of the older legendaries have shot at the action, with the Space-Time trio or Arceus being the ones blamed for the action. Hope that this continues and that you have a great time writing it.
Till next time!
Unsettling-A.I.R.
6/11/2020 c7
8triscythe59
Liking the story, hope you keep going. Any plans on bringing other Legendary Pokémon’s in this fic?

Liking the story, hope you keep going. Any plans on bringing other Legendary Pokémon’s in this fic?
6/9/2020 c7 Unknown
Loving this! The trio is getting more time in the story. Can't wait for the trio birds and Lugia to show up soon.
Loving this! The trio is getting more time in the story. Can't wait for the trio birds and Lugia to show up soon.
6/10/2020 c7
22Roy4
The story is going pretty well… But I have a curiosity, I say this is supposed to be a Crossover with Pokemon. The question that intrigues me is: Will several Pokemons appear? Or just Ho-Oh and Lugia.
I say as recognizable classics such as Pikachu, Charmander, Mew, Lucario, Incineroar and among many who leave the RJNPR team stunned in this regard.

The story is going pretty well… But I have a curiosity, I say this is supposed to be a Crossover with Pokemon. The question that intrigues me is: Will several Pokemons appear? Or just Ho-Oh and Lugia.
I say as recognizable classics such as Pikachu, Charmander, Mew, Lucario, Incineroar and among many who leave the RJNPR team stunned in this regard.
6/10/2020 c2 Takedo
You have a slight problem with "it's" vs. "its".
The first one is the short version of "it is".
Second one is ownership, and it's the one you want for most of this chapter.
"...its assaulter..."
I'm also getting an error with assaulter for some reason.
You have a slight problem with "it's" vs. "its".
The first one is the short version of "it is".
Second one is ownership, and it's the one you want for most of this chapter.
"...its assaulter..."
I'm also getting an error with assaulter for some reason.
6/9/2020 c7
4Blue Phantasm
Can’t wait to see the legendary birds come into play and help out and maybe see some more legends make an appearance as well.

Can’t wait to see the legendary birds come into play and help out and maybe see some more legends make an appearance as well.
6/9/2020 c7
2darkromdemon
Oh really Nice, the Beast are doing great work hopefully their cousins can learn to be more united if they are going to help

Oh really Nice, the Beast are doing great work hopefully their cousins can learn to be more united if they are going to help
6/5/2020 c6
4Blue Phantasm
Will other legends or mythical pokemon show up? If so I would love to see their reactions to each if them like mew, mewtwo, groudon, kyogre, the legendary swords, the regis, and such

Will other legends or mythical pokemon show up? If so I would love to see their reactions to each if them like mew, mewtwo, groudon, kyogre, the legendary swords, the regis, and such
6/1/2020 c6 Unknown
No Way. Lugia!?
That's gonna be interesting especially when Ho-Oh is in this too. I'm hoping since you introduced the Ho-Oh trio legends (Entei, Raiku, and Suicune) that you introduced the three legendary birds Moltress, Articuno, and Zapdos.
Great Chapter by the way! :)
No Way. Lugia!?
That's gonna be interesting especially when Ho-Oh is in this too. I'm hoping since you introduced the Ho-Oh trio legends (Entei, Raiku, and Suicune) that you introduced the three legendary birds Moltress, Articuno, and Zapdos.
Great Chapter by the way! :)
5/30/2020 c6 Matt
Nice. Though there are a few spelling mistakes. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Nice. Though there are a few spelling mistakes. Can’t wait for the next chapter.