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2/12 c1 141woahahairspike1
Me: *shoves iPad to face* What.
Joey: yep, I did this
Me: shut up
IT'S SO GOOD SO FAR, PLEASE, CONTINUE IT
7/18/2020 c1 Taryn
OMG, PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!
7/14/2020 c1 AnonymousWorld
Please make more! This can turn into a great story!
7/12/2020 c1 3TheMysteryperson1X
Is there a date for when you upload the next chapter
7/11/2020 c1 3Lunar Moon Butterfly
You know how to create a compelling beginning! This story seems really interesting so far, keep up the good work!
7/8/2020 c1 Taryn
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!
5/5/2020 c1 23The ink stained poet
Well done on writing your first BATIM story!
So that was definitely a great start! The idea was very creative, and the transition beween Amber's home and Joey's was very well written and didn't seem forced at all. I like the spin on the letter that Henry originally received, you made it recognisable while still making it original. And the twist at the end...definitely didn't expect that. I'm very excited to see how this story plays out. Great work!

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