7/19 c2 Nameless
Where is the next chapter? At this rate I'll be dead and buried before this story makes it to the point a whole month has passed. If it ever makes it that far.
Where is the next chapter? At this rate I'll be dead and buried before this story makes it to the point a whole month has passed. If it ever makes it that far.
7/18 c18 erozoth
A power that causes more issues than it solves (gloves) and all that for a fashion helper... anyway, this MC is too stupid to breathe unaided, its failure after failure, not mention the useless amount of words, all the tech talk, like, we know its made up so why put so much effort into it?: Got nanites, got materials, made nanites, continue story. He just is, he has massive potential, even now, and he (or the authors) made him so... incompetent he uses about 10% of what he currently can do. I'm out of this novel.
A power that causes more issues than it solves (gloves) and all that for a fashion helper... anyway, this MC is too stupid to breathe unaided, its failure after failure, not mention the useless amount of words, all the tech talk, like, we know its made up so why put so much effort into it?: Got nanites, got materials, made nanites, continue story. He just is, he has massive potential, even now, and he (or the authors) made him so... incompetent he uses about 10% of what he currently can do. I'm out of this novel.
7/17 c161 2Lord Roustabout
Things are still pretty hectic, so I’m going to need another day to get the chapter ready. Apologies for the short notice on this announcement and the frequency of recent delays. I’m hoping that I’ll be able to get back on a stable schedule once things calm down.
Things are still pretty hectic, so I’m going to need another day to get the chapter ready. Apologies for the short notice on this announcement and the frequency of recent delays. I’m hoping that I’ll be able to get back on a stable schedule once things calm down.
7/17 c16 erozoth
Skipped this chapter, dont need POV of evil like this, especially since it just points out even more how bad the MC is doing.
Kinda losing point in this novel, if someone wants to read the same plot again (over all plot: new cape struggling in a dangerous world) read the original.
Skipped this chapter, dont need POV of evil like this, especially since it just points out even more how bad the MC is doing.
Kinda losing point in this novel, if someone wants to read the same plot again (over all plot: new cape struggling in a dangerous world) read the original.
7/17 c15 erozoth
look, this is another chapter where the MC makes things worse than the original.
Not to mention the power trip chapter, the entire chapter was a sense of danger, well executed, but made the MC seem like an idiot. Authors tend to do that, write the MC do something very dangerous because he can't tell someone he knows "We can't do that" and instead indulge them.
You know that doesn't happen right? If a person knows there is extreme danger he won't tell their friend\child "Sure, lets go get ice cream, should be fine".
It would be more: Something very bad can happen, and very likely at that? "We ain't going anywhere"
look, this is another chapter where the MC makes things worse than the original.
Not to mention the power trip chapter, the entire chapter was a sense of danger, well executed, but made the MC seem like an idiot. Authors tend to do that, write the MC do something very dangerous because he can't tell someone he knows "We can't do that" and instead indulge them.
You know that doesn't happen right? If a person knows there is extreme danger he won't tell their friend\child "Sure, lets go get ice cream, should be fine".
It would be more: Something very bad can happen, and very likely at that? "We ain't going anywhere"
7/15 c151 Guest
Sabah professional victim
Sabah professional victim
7/15 c150 Guest
Sabah seems like a very jealous and selfish woman. Joe never did anything bad to her yet she's gaslighting him and taking advantage of his social inability. Making him feel guilty for everything.
Sabah seems like a very jealous and selfish woman. Joe never did anything bad to her yet she's gaslighting him and taking advantage of his social inability. Making him feel guilty for everything.
7/16 c3 ironhair
Lost interest here. Too many new powers, not actually letting it grow.
I'll probably try reading this again later
Lost interest here. Too many new powers, not actually letting it grow.
I'll probably try reading this again later
7/16 c10 erozoth
Look, the author didn't want reincarnation or transmigration so the MC will not be OP, his current powers and knowledge would be too much, rather than going for a pure OC (which I probably would not have read), the "voice" came as a discount knowledge of the world, utterly useless, now its making things even worse.
Reading a fanfic where the new MC is making everything worse? Why would I do that.
I know, this story is old so its pointless to comment, it just seems weird where he gets all this powers that accumulate into "not good enough" to somehow overcome the lack of knowledge just so the plot will go the same or worse.
This is more or less the first time, it really depends on the second major plot and possibly the third, if both go the same way, ie same or worse, then its a pattern and reading the novel is pointless since its predictable and I can read the original, at least that has the benefit of being original.
will see how it goes, so far... eh. a lot of chapters and nothing to show for it.
Look, the author didn't want reincarnation or transmigration so the MC will not be OP, his current powers and knowledge would be too much, rather than going for a pure OC (which I probably would not have read), the "voice" came as a discount knowledge of the world, utterly useless, now its making things even worse.
Reading a fanfic where the new MC is making everything worse? Why would I do that.
I know, this story is old so its pointless to comment, it just seems weird where he gets all this powers that accumulate into "not good enough" to somehow overcome the lack of knowledge just so the plot will go the same or worse.
This is more or less the first time, it really depends on the second major plot and possibly the third, if both go the same way, ie same or worse, then its a pattern and reading the novel is pointless since its predictable and I can read the original, at least that has the benefit of being original.
will see how it goes, so far... eh. a lot of chapters and nothing to show for it.
7/15 c88 Red Bleed
I was just wondering. About Chubster; the slower he is the stronger he get, right? As for living organisms, the bigger they are, the slower the get, right? So if Apeiron create gigantification device, and use it on Chubster, how OP could he be? I mean, with the additional mass and (presumably) multiplicative effect of his power in proportion with his lowered agility, would he be able to wrestle Endbringer in even footing if he grow to match their size? In term of pure brute force, who is stronger, Behemoth or Chubster at the size of Behemoth?
I was just wondering. About Chubster; the slower he is the stronger he get, right? As for living organisms, the bigger they are, the slower the get, right? So if Apeiron create gigantification device, and use it on Chubster, how OP could he be? I mean, with the additional mass and (presumably) multiplicative effect of his power in proportion with his lowered agility, would he be able to wrestle Endbringer in even footing if he grow to match their size? In term of pure brute force, who is stronger, Behemoth or Chubster at the size of Behemoth?
7/15 c6 HeartofBraum
I feel like currently the MC has a problem of lacking personal motivation for basically anything he does. It was mentioned that he is separate from the conflict engine, if that is the case why is he desperate to be a cape? Honestly it is not even a hugely difficult to fix, make it so his growth in gaining specialisations is tied to interacting with other shards, with the knowledge that there is a threat bigger than the Endbringers, him becoming active in the cape scene would be necessary for survival. Currently there is no reason why he can’t just tinker away in his personal workshop, in fact it would likely be his best chance at survival.
I feel like currently the MC has a problem of lacking personal motivation for basically anything he does. It was mentioned that he is separate from the conflict engine, if that is the case why is he desperate to be a cape? Honestly it is not even a hugely difficult to fix, make it so his growth in gaining specialisations is tied to interacting with other shards, with the knowledge that there is a threat bigger than the Endbringers, him becoming active in the cape scene would be necessary for survival. Currently there is no reason why he can’t just tinker away in his personal workshop, in fact it would likely be his best chance at survival.
7/15 c158 2SixFtWookie
And Joe's gone full Magrathea. Of course he would. I hope one of the duplicates spent thier time on the fjords. They're very fiddly bits after all.
And Joe's gone full Magrathea. Of course he would. I hope one of the duplicates spent thier time on the fjords. They're very fiddly bits after all.
7/15 c152 SixFtWookie
The dress with pockets, is that a response to comments about the dress that went for a cheap six figure sum at the auction?
The dress with pockets, is that a response to comments about the dress that went for a cheap six figure sum at the auction?