
5/6/2020 c1
4DragonTamer1
I love it. If you are going to give Natsu a pairing, don't let me know. I want it to be a surprise.

I love it. If you are going to give Natsu a pairing, don't let me know. I want it to be a surprise.
5/6/2020 c1 Wolf1741
This story looks amazing so far you did a really good job. I can’t wait to read the next chapter
This story looks amazing so far you did a really good job. I can’t wait to read the next chapter
5/6/2020 c1 38Solaire38
Oh ho, this is a great first chapter! Can't wait to find out what Ozpin did to piss Natsu off this much (beyond sealing him, and why did he do that?) and I also can't wait to see how Salem will react to this. Also is this Earthland in the future? Or is Natsu in a different world? Regardless, keep up the good work!
Oh ho, this is a great first chapter! Can't wait to find out what Ozpin did to piss Natsu off this much (beyond sealing him, and why did he do that?) and I also can't wait to see how Salem will react to this. Also is this Earthland in the future? Or is Natsu in a different world? Regardless, keep up the good work!