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11/5/2020 c1 E
While the tone was fine, and the general story fine too, you really need to work on your punctuation. Every other word in a sentence doesn't need to be capitalized. Names, places, anything like that. That's fine to capitalize. It's not "It was a shame Tarkin died, he had known the Man. He was a hard working Man, who earned His place." Only Tarkin and sentence starts should be capitalized there. I know that was a paraphrase of a quote, but you get my point.
7/27/2020 c1 17RedBloodedMoon
Is this an one shot or the start of a Serie? Because I would love to read more!
5/18/2020 c1 Sauron's Wrath
So this is what Vader did after Last Hope.
5/8/2020 c1 SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
So the start doesn't sound bad, but is it a one shot or a running series?

Please continue to write quickly.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos

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