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9/24 c4 barbi7777
Está súper, amo todas las historias que creaste y como muestras a Goku y a chichi, sigue escribiendo en todas tus historias por favor, sobretodo después de buu
5/11 c4 cc6512eng
I'd like to say when I read ch. 3 the word Laundry I suddenly remembered I still have clothes in my washing machine and haven't taken them out. :0

I like this party story. You write their character well in their family position. I like Chichi said when Gohan 16 was playing superhero. XDXD.
Good job!
(And oh idk is that young people party is always been that mess my good)
5/11 c2 cc6512eng
I love this one yea. XD and Gohan's dream has much potential as a AU;))))))) when I read ["You left me."
"You told me to go!"] I was laughing out XD. (Not a fan of James Bond but maybe it's a plot from there?)
Yes I love how Gohan showed Videl how they celebrated in dream at last. :3
5/11 c1 cc6512eng
The beginning is cute then become sexy...;))))
This tradition between them is crazy but sweet XD
Poor Piccolo I lmao in the last. XD
5/10 c4 6spottyrecords
More Gohan and Videl, please!
5/9 c3 LolihSon
Acabou na melhor parte, POR QUE?
5/8 c2 SS4fan
I am a simple woman. I see stories by Elisa J and I click them. Love your Gochi stories.
5/7 c1 Guest
Ja ja ja. Pobre Piccolo siempre le toca ser testigo de la pasión de Goku y Chichi.
Me pregunto si alguna vez alguno del clan de los guerreros Z le tocara presenciar tanta pasión desenfrenada. Sorprendiendose del ingenuo Goku o la salvaje Milk. Ja ja.
Que se mueran de envidia.
Pregunta: qué es eso del sucubo? Me perdi algo de la historia?
5/7 c1 4tamafriend
Man, I love it! Goku and Chi-Chi are too much! I love it!

Poor Mr. Piccolo! He just can't catch a break! XD!
5/7 c1 Amanny
Poor Piccolo, his ears is a blessing and a curse
5/7 c1 Courtney
LMAO! That ending!
5/7 c1 1Kookookachui
Cuuuuuute first chapter! Kinda reminds me of FSDB heating up comicyou know what I mean?

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