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6/1/2020 c4 25Nicolle
Much better than the last three chapters. You can tell you wrote without distraction this time.
5/31/2020 c4 19PSYLOD V
You're doing a Pokemon fic too? Awesome! I just posted one myself today.
As for your story, I figured I'd give it a Follow & Favorite and stick around to see what's going on next! I like where this is slowly going so far as Sol assists Professor Oak in his endeavors, while having some experiences of his own like the Dive scene in Chapter 3.
5/9/2020 c3 25Nicolle
Another good chapter!
You tense jump again. And one paragraph in the scene with Daisy, after coming out of the water drops several words mid sentence.
5/9/2020 c1 Nicolle
Good start!
You switched tenses a few times in the beginning.
5/8/2020 c2 2Sgt.Alcatraz
Mind raped by MewTwo. Ouch
Good concept for story, I believe I only saw 1 story similiar to this.

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