
8/8/2020 c21
3kornikouva
A huge sigh of relief! There was I moment when I thought that Sweeney would not show up. Him not going after the judge to comfort Nellie shows that his priorities are starting to get right.
But Beth? I suddenly became afraid for the little girl.
More looooong chapters please! Loving them as always. x

A huge sigh of relief! There was I moment when I thought that Sweeney would not show up. Him not going after the judge to comfort Nellie shows that his priorities are starting to get right.
But Beth? I suddenly became afraid for the little girl.
More looooong chapters please! Loving them as always. x
7/30/2020 c20 kornikouva
I’m now beginning to hate Sweeney for being so fickle minded! Poor Nellie is suffering unnecessarily because he can’t man up. But seriously, love the chapter!
I’m now beginning to hate Sweeney for being so fickle minded! Poor Nellie is suffering unnecessarily because he can’t man up. But seriously, love the chapter!
7/30/2020 c20
1bellovettrix
Whew! Sweeney is on and off. I kinda hate him. I hope soon he'll make up his mind and stop it's war with his heart 'cause I'm sure his heart beats now right for Mrs. Lovett. Hmp.

Whew! Sweeney is on and off. I kinda hate him. I hope soon he'll make up his mind and stop it's war with his heart 'cause I'm sure his heart beats now right for Mrs. Lovett. Hmp.
7/21/2020 c19 Bellovettrix
Thanks for the updates. These help me during quarantine. Bless.
Thanks for the updates. These help me during quarantine. Bless.
7/21/2020 c19
3kornikouva
What stubborn kids we have here! Hahaha. Toby and Beth are so cutie patooties but now I worry about them. I hope it’s just pies and candies for them and no kidnap whatsoever. Anyways, I’m in with wherever you want them to bring.
But our Baker and his Barber, quite stubborn too! I hope Sweeney will not turn 360 degrees again and leave Nellie brokenhearted. Because if this happens again, I’m afraid that she will run straight to George’s arms. And that will really depress me. That will be her lowest point if it happens.
I’m so happy that Sweeney finally admits in his head that he needs her. I hope he realize soon that it’s not just Nellie’s body she needs. If you would super stress Nellie with Arthur’s case, please make sure Sweeney stays by her side. Or else it’s to bedlam with her, I think. Too much pressure for one poor heart.
I hope your work frees up some time for this story. I really, really love it. Thank you!

What stubborn kids we have here! Hahaha. Toby and Beth are so cutie patooties but now I worry about them. I hope it’s just pies and candies for them and no kidnap whatsoever. Anyways, I’m in with wherever you want them to bring.
But our Baker and his Barber, quite stubborn too! I hope Sweeney will not turn 360 degrees again and leave Nellie brokenhearted. Because if this happens again, I’m afraid that she will run straight to George’s arms. And that will really depress me. That will be her lowest point if it happens.
I’m so happy that Sweeney finally admits in his head that he needs her. I hope he realize soon that it’s not just Nellie’s body she needs. If you would super stress Nellie with Arthur’s case, please make sure Sweeney stays by her side. Or else it’s to bedlam with her, I think. Too much pressure for one poor heart.
I hope your work frees up some time for this story. I really, really love it. Thank you!
7/21/2020 c19
13Welovethat
THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY! I’m so glad Sweeney got over himself and told Nell

THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY! I’m so glad Sweeney got over himself and told Nell
7/11/2020 c17 bellovettrix
Sweeney is being adorable, right? While Turpin is consistently being a perv. I hope Sweeney will protect Nellie at all cost.
Sweeney is being adorable, right? While Turpin is consistently being a perv. I hope Sweeney will protect Nellie at all cost.
7/1/2020 c16 bellovettrix
Btw, i love how you wrote about the way Mrs. Lovett is acting. That's how i always imagine she would be once Sweeney rejected her, bc i think that's understandable. I mean almost all her life revolved around him, and then they got intimate just to be rejected the next. It would be hard to stay happy. He's so close, and yet so far. Also, again, i like that Sweeney notices the change in her that she lost some of her cheerfulness.
Ughhh, and Sweenett affects me so much lmao!
Btw, i love how you wrote about the way Mrs. Lovett is acting. That's how i always imagine she would be once Sweeney rejected her, bc i think that's understandable. I mean almost all her life revolved around him, and then they got intimate just to be rejected the next. It would be hard to stay happy. He's so close, and yet so far. Also, again, i like that Sweeney notices the change in her that she lost some of her cheerfulness.
Ughhh, and Sweenett affects me so much lmao!
7/1/2020 c16
3kornikouva
Oh Sweeney’s so sweet. But I wish he would soon bump his head and move on from his confusion that he actually does care for the dear Baker. I was actually hoping that he would accompany her to the courthouse just for support. But I guess that would just bring back morbid memories. So maybe a continuation of that conversation Toby has interrupted?
I’m now thinking as to what Turpin has to do with Arthur’s attack. Oh I’m really so invested now in your story.

Oh Sweeney’s so sweet. But I wish he would soon bump his head and move on from his confusion that he actually does care for the dear Baker. I was actually hoping that he would accompany her to the courthouse just for support. But I guess that would just bring back morbid memories. So maybe a continuation of that conversation Toby has interrupted?
I’m now thinking as to what Turpin has to do with Arthur’s attack. Oh I’m really so invested now in your story.
7/1/2020 c16
1bellovettrix
I'm glad Sweeney is being kind. But please don't make him very soft, or he's not Sweeney Todd. I always imagine Mr. T showing care but not in a Benjamin way.

I'm glad Sweeney is being kind. But please don't make him very soft, or he's not Sweeney Todd. I always imagine Mr. T showing care but not in a Benjamin way.
7/1/2020 c16
2elvishsparrow
This chapter is definitely better than the last! I love how Sweeney made breakfast for Mrs Lovett, it’s so sweet and a kind of thank you for all she’s done for him. If the Judge says he’s innocent I will have to stop reading this story. So pleaseeeeeee don’t do that to me!

This chapter is definitely better than the last! I love how Sweeney made breakfast for Mrs Lovett, it’s so sweet and a kind of thank you for all she’s done for him. If the Judge says he’s innocent I will have to stop reading this story. So pleaseeeeeee don’t do that to me!
6/27/2020 c15
2elvishsparrow
In many ways this chapter was really good. The only things I might have changed was that I don’t necessarily think that Mrs Lovett would necessarily had the courage to show Sweeney Lucy’s grave straight after he had rejected her. I think she probably would have wanted some time to get herself together.
One of my favourite parts, though, was when Sweeney said “If you waited fifteen years for me, I will try to make it worth it.” I think this is one of the times that Benjamin Barker really shines through the mask of Sweeney Todd.
This chapter was really good, just needed perhaps a few changes.

In many ways this chapter was really good. The only things I might have changed was that I don’t necessarily think that Mrs Lovett would necessarily had the courage to show Sweeney Lucy’s grave straight after he had rejected her. I think she probably would have wanted some time to get herself together.
One of my favourite parts, though, was when Sweeney said “If you waited fifteen years for me, I will try to make it worth it.” I think this is one of the times that Benjamin Barker really shines through the mask of Sweeney Todd.
This chapter was really good, just needed perhaps a few changes.
6/27/2020 c15
3kornikouva
Oh noes! I’m crying, really. My heart is crying for all their what ifs. But then I believe it’s not yet too late. Sweeney could still marry Eleanore. They could have that little red-haired girl with warm brown eyes. They could still move to the sea like she wanted...How I hate Lucy.
But I love, love, love this chapter. But you better make up to us for this one, love.

Oh noes! I’m crying, really. My heart is crying for all their what ifs. But then I believe it’s not yet too late. Sweeney could still marry Eleanore. They could have that little red-haired girl with warm brown eyes. They could still move to the sea like she wanted...How I hate Lucy.
But I love, love, love this chapter. But you better make up to us for this one, love.