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1/23 c6 24Six of Twelve
Excellent story. Thanks for writing it.

The Bread song reminds me of my father, who died 26 years ago.
5/16/2020 c2 Guest
I suspect that Odo is thinking rock as in jewel and yes women generally like jewelry.
5/16/2020 c1 26Iniki Melset
I really love this story: it has emotional impact I cannot give mine, and that is an ability I admire. Your analyses of the respective characters of Kira's and Odo's children are integrated in the accounts of their actions and words, so that you can visualize their varying reactions and responses to the return of their father, see how different and yet how alike the three of them are, each very likable in his or her own way, reflecting as they do the properties of both parents.

The end of your story was beautifully done and so touching, and I mean it. That song, the text of which you use for the ending, it is fitting, a lovely tribute to lost loved ones.

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