for Chasing Waterfalls7/13/2020 c1 Guest
Yo, can you do some more updates? Pwwease?
Yo, can you do some more updates? Pwwease?
7/11/2020 c1 kenvenience
I feel like I have found a treasure after finding out this fic. Please do continue this fiction. It feels like ages I haven't read any fem!Harry fanfics, especially the crossover ones.
I feel like I have found a treasure after finding out this fic. Please do continue this fiction. It feels like ages I haven't read any fem!Harry fanfics, especially the crossover ones.
7/1/2020 c1 Beatsie-Boy
Yoooo please follow through this! There aren't enough well written stories with ( Fem Harry x Edward ) pairings.
Yoooo please follow through this! There aren't enough well written stories with ( Fem Harry x Edward ) pairings.
7/1/2020 c1 
1Nyx Muirinn
A great first chapter and I'd love to see Harry with a female Cullen really but if male the is the only option I'd love if it was jasper :) just never really agreed with Edward due to how controlling Edward was in the books with taking away Bella's choices.
1Nyx MuirinnA great first chapter and I'd love to see Harry with a female Cullen really but if male the is the only option I'd love if it was jasper :) just never really agreed with Edward due to how controlling Edward was in the books with taking away Bella's choices.
6/30/2020 c1 Alondra1018
i loved it, first time reading a crossover of twilight and harry potter
please keep updating !
i loved it, first time reading a crossover of twilight and harry potter
please keep updating !
6/3/2020 c1 FanficLover577
I love this chapter. It is definitely a refreshing take on the Harry Potter/Twilight fandom stories I have read.
I love this chapter. It is definitely a refreshing take on the Harry Potter/Twilight fandom stories I have read.
5/30/2020 c1 3flowerangel502
Was that redhead Ginny since you compared her to who I assume was molly? Did Hermione have Hugo in that hospital? Also the redhead crying over Cedric I’m excited for fem!harry to be a redhead too, love that trope! That part about Cedric being an Occlumens makes me think if you’re going to have the twist that Cedric and Edward are related distantly like one of his parents was a branch off of the Diggory family tree or something, especially because in twilight they say how gifts are similar within families (Charlie being foggy to read sometimes, Edwards mom just knowing somehow Carlisle can save Edward, Reneesmes whole touch telepathy thing). I’m hoping this is a Fem!Harry/Edward!
3flowerangel502Was that redhead Ginny since you compared her to who I assume was molly? Did Hermione have Hugo in that hospital? Also the redhead crying over Cedric I’m excited for fem!harry to be a redhead too, love that trope! That part about Cedric being an Occlumens makes me think if you’re going to have the twist that Cedric and Edward are related distantly like one of his parents was a branch off of the Diggory family tree or something, especially because in twilight they say how gifts are similar within families (Charlie being foggy to read sometimes, Edwards mom just knowing somehow Carlisle can save Edward, Reneesmes whole touch telepathy thing). I’m hoping this is a Fem!Harry/Edward!
5/20/2020 c1 Yaasss
Yyaassss please continue! :)
Yyaassss please continue! :)
5/18/2020 c1 Guest
Very interesting start. Would definitely like you to continue.
Very interesting start. Would definitely like you to continue.
5/16/2020 c1 1yourakek
I read too many of these crossovers and I won't judge your story too much, it's just a fanfiction and you write absolutely whatever you want. But here are my thought: fem-Harry is unnecessary and a bit cringey, I totally get where you were trying to go with his character - making him fierce as other reviewers noted and not one to stand down - but it's perhaps a little over the top. I honestly think the whole Cedric is Edward concept is quite cringey as it tells me you take your info regarding the two bookseries from the movies, and I am guessing the dobbeltganger-concept won't be important further on in the story and likely just be a little "oh btw he looks like Cedric lol". Of course, that's just purely speculation based on what I've seen of these types of stories in the past.
Now I've said a lot of shit you might not agree with, maybe you love the the dobbeltganger stuff or the femHarry thing. You have absolutely full right to love it, and no reason to listen to me if you disagree. This is your story and you should write it the exact way you want. It's great practice and can be really fun.
I absolutely do not want you to take this as discouragement and I look forward to seeing your work develop.
1yourakekI read too many of these crossovers and I won't judge your story too much, it's just a fanfiction and you write absolutely whatever you want. But here are my thought: fem-Harry is unnecessary and a bit cringey, I totally get where you were trying to go with his character - making him fierce as other reviewers noted and not one to stand down - but it's perhaps a little over the top. I honestly think the whole Cedric is Edward concept is quite cringey as it tells me you take your info regarding the two bookseries from the movies, and I am guessing the dobbeltganger-concept won't be important further on in the story and likely just be a little "oh btw he looks like Cedric lol". Of course, that's just purely speculation based on what I've seen of these types of stories in the past.
Now I've said a lot of shit you might not agree with, maybe you love the the dobbeltganger stuff or the femHarry thing. You have absolutely full right to love it, and no reason to listen to me if you disagree. This is your story and you should write it the exact way you want. It's great practice and can be really fun.
I absolutely do not want you to take this as discouragement and I look forward to seeing your work develop.