for Child of the Ouroboros7/31/2020 c8 
6Rook's fanfiction
Great chapter, the scenes with Luna and Blake are just wonderful. Can't wait to see what happens with the dragon, will it just try to get as far away from Blake as possible, or will the whole dragon goddess thing mean it will actually see her as a goddess and be overcome with worshipful deference or something. It would be hilarious to see everyone's reaction to the dragon kneeling down and presenting the golden egg as an offering to it's goddess.
6Rook's fanfictionGreat chapter, the scenes with Luna and Blake are just wonderful. Can't wait to see what happens with the dragon, will it just try to get as far away from Blake as possible, or will the whole dragon goddess thing mean it will actually see her as a goddess and be overcome with worshipful deference or something. It would be hilarious to see everyone's reaction to the dragon kneeling down and presenting the golden egg as an offering to it's goddess.
7/31/2020 c8 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
now the question remains is the dragon from her task just hide in the corner crying for mommy
nice chapter thx for writing it
now the question remains is the dragon from her task just hide in the corner crying for mommy
7/21/2020 c7 Souna Lucifer
She needs a magic circle to teleport? I think it's unnecessary because Ophis doesn't need it for teleportation (as far as I know)
She needs a magic circle to teleport? I think it's unnecessary because Ophis doesn't need it for teleportation (as far as I know)
7/7/2020 c4 DalkonCledwin
Wow, what a convoluted explanation of the Dungeons and Dragons “Tongues” spell XD
Luna’s the caterpillar, huh?
Wow, what a convoluted explanation of the Dungeons and Dragons “Tongues” spell XD
Luna’s the caterpillar, huh?
7/7/2020 c3 DalkonCledwin
Your description of Ophis’ crest does nothing more than reduce the actual narrative’s word count each time you explain what it looks like, which you have done at least once in each chapter thus far.
And describing Blake’s appearance twice within the same chapter causes the same problem with regards to lowering your word count.
Your description of Ophis’ crest does nothing more than reduce the actual narrative’s word count each time you explain what it looks like, which you have done at least once in each chapter thus far.
And describing Blake’s appearance twice within the same chapter causes the same problem with regards to lowering your word count.
7/7/2020 c1 DalkonCledwin
Interesting, but... I have to note that the chapters seem to be a bit short if you have 6 of them and only a little over 5,000 words.
Interesting, but... I have to note that the chapters seem to be a bit short if you have 6 of them and only a little over 5,000 words.