for Time After Time2/11/2022 c4 
2Tonyorobsky
That story is abandoned, and it’s probably for the best.
By preventing the birth of Voldy, Voldy should have ceased to exist.
By preventing the Voldemort war, a lot of people who should have died lived.
But also a lot of people who should have been born because of the couples and alliances made during wartime, wouldn’t be born.
40 years of butterfly effect from the absence of a historical event that affected thousands of lives. Harry could have very well wiped his existence alongside Voldy’s. As well as the existence of his friends and many of the people he knew.
This whole time travel thing was made without proper consideration for all the troubles it could create.
And have Harry return to his timeline with such minor alterations, and Voldy still there when he shouldn’t exist, and abandoned without proper oversight and with knowledge of time travel? It’s a good thing the story was abandoned.
2TonyorobskyThat story is abandoned, and it’s probably for the best.
By preventing the birth of Voldy, Voldy should have ceased to exist.
By preventing the Voldemort war, a lot of people who should have died lived.
But also a lot of people who should have been born because of the couples and alliances made during wartime, wouldn’t be born.
40 years of butterfly effect from the absence of a historical event that affected thousands of lives. Harry could have very well wiped his existence alongside Voldy’s. As well as the existence of his friends and many of the people he knew.
This whole time travel thing was made without proper consideration for all the troubles it could create.
And have Harry return to his timeline with such minor alterations, and Voldy still there when he shouldn’t exist, and abandoned without proper oversight and with knowledge of time travel? It’s a good thing the story was abandoned.
12/12/2021 c2 13R.V.Wells
I don't mind at all Harry going to Ginny, I'm not a Hinny person but I can understand her dealing with her insecurities the wrong way and it's good of Harry not to use it against her.
Trelawney's inner eye fails again not seeing Hermione joining her class, of course it was brief anyway.
That astral projection thing sounds like the very solution to time travels.
13R.V.WellsI don't mind at all Harry going to Ginny, I'm not a Hinny person but I can understand her dealing with her insecurities the wrong way and it's good of Harry not to use it against her.
Trelawney's inner eye fails again not seeing Hermione joining her class, of course it was brief anyway.
That astral projection thing sounds like the very solution to time travels.
12/12/2021 c1 R.V.Wells
Great beginning, good use of intrigue and extraverbal language, Ron is very much in character and Daphne is impressive.
Great beginning, good use of intrigue and extraverbal language, Ron is very much in character and Daphne is impressive.
8/4/2020 c4 IWantABetterWebsite
Well, this story is...weird is probably the best word. I'm interested in seeing where it goes though.
Well, this story is...weird is probably the best word. I'm interested in seeing where it goes though.
6/21/2020 c4 FantasticNovelLover
Because of the original plot, right now, this story has so many possibilities for the future. I can't wait to see how it will proceed and finish.
You managed to create something that can't be called a cliche. Considering how many people has been writtting for how many years, this is a great success in fanfic world.
Kind regards and stay safe.
Because of the original plot, right now, this story has so many possibilities for the future. I can't wait to see how it will proceed and finish.
You managed to create something that can't be called a cliche. Considering how many people has been writtting for how many years, this is a great success in fanfic world.
Kind regards and stay safe.
6/20/2020 c4 Brockster550
Wow, alot of things did change after Harry prevented the first wizarding war. Yep, without Harry's Boy-Who-Lived, Ginny never would've spared Harry a glance at him, instead she becomes an obsessive fangirl of Cedric Diggory because of him winning the Triwizard Tournament. At least Cedric didn't let the whole fame thing get to him and instead went for someone who loved him for who he was. Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes never existing in the alternate timeline was a shame, but if Harry's parents were still alive, they wouldn't have known the Weasleys well. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
Wow, alot of things did change after Harry prevented the first wizarding war. Yep, without Harry's Boy-Who-Lived, Ginny never would've spared Harry a glance at him, instead she becomes an obsessive fangirl of Cedric Diggory because of him winning the Triwizard Tournament. At least Cedric didn't let the whole fame thing get to him and instead went for someone who loved him for who he was. Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes never existing in the alternate timeline was a shame, but if Harry's parents were still alive, they wouldn't have known the Weasleys well. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
6/20/2020 c4 7csg-III
I'm glad Melinda made it out ok. I was going to say 'unharmed' but I realize that this is not an accurate word to describe her situation. The message written in blood on the back of her hand... Probably more terrifying than the ghost of Voldemort itself, and definitely has Umbridge's "signature" over it. I wonder who's going to be the Big Bad of this story: the ghost of Voldemort, Umbridge, Daphne's father, or someone else like Bellatrix or Lucius Malfoy. I can see this story unfolding in so many different ways, and I'm sure you will make it very interesting going forward.
Ouch, the scene of Harry realizing that Ginny was just using him, heartbreaking. I'm glad that Cedric didn't fall for Ginny, Cho is good to him and they're happy. I actually think now Ginny might even try to run after Harry again, Harry seems to be her second choice/consolation prize. It wouldn't surprise me if she sheds some crocodile tears to try to get Harry back. I know that in canon, Dean Thomas was 'hurt' that Ginny and Harry began dating immediately after his break-up with Ginny, but Harry didn't seem to care much about it. Now Harry can fully sympathize with Dean, when he saw that Ginny was ready to dump him for Cedric.
Glad that Harry has Daphne to help him navigate through the new timeline. I get the feeling that the status of the mind/spirit of the Harry native of this new timeline will be addressed eventually too. I can see why Harry would think of Snape as the one who gave Hermione detention, but I actually think it was Umbridge. Ouch, even though things improved for Harry, it's awful that Daphne previously had a loving grandfather but now has a jerk of a father and a potentially even worse stepmother. Hope Harry can help her out too.
I'm really loving this story. Congratulations on another excellent chapter, and looking forward to more.
7csg-IIII'm glad Melinda made it out ok. I was going to say 'unharmed' but I realize that this is not an accurate word to describe her situation. The message written in blood on the back of her hand... Probably more terrifying than the ghost of Voldemort itself, and definitely has Umbridge's "signature" over it. I wonder who's going to be the Big Bad of this story: the ghost of Voldemort, Umbridge, Daphne's father, or someone else like Bellatrix or Lucius Malfoy. I can see this story unfolding in so many different ways, and I'm sure you will make it very interesting going forward.
Ouch, the scene of Harry realizing that Ginny was just using him, heartbreaking. I'm glad that Cedric didn't fall for Ginny, Cho is good to him and they're happy. I actually think now Ginny might even try to run after Harry again, Harry seems to be her second choice/consolation prize. It wouldn't surprise me if she sheds some crocodile tears to try to get Harry back. I know that in canon, Dean Thomas was 'hurt' that Ginny and Harry began dating immediately after his break-up with Ginny, but Harry didn't seem to care much about it. Now Harry can fully sympathize with Dean, when he saw that Ginny was ready to dump him for Cedric.
Glad that Harry has Daphne to help him navigate through the new timeline. I get the feeling that the status of the mind/spirit of the Harry native of this new timeline will be addressed eventually too. I can see why Harry would think of Snape as the one who gave Hermione detention, but I actually think it was Umbridge. Ouch, even though things improved for Harry, it's awful that Daphne previously had a loving grandfather but now has a jerk of a father and a potentially even worse stepmother. Hope Harry can help her out too.
I'm really loving this story. Congratulations on another excellent chapter, and looking forward to more.