for Innocence Lost10/2/2024 c34 TrickyTwist
That was a wonderful story! I really appreciated the pace of the plot, you kept things interesting. My only suggestion is that the character development was a bit lacking, by that I mean Rosalie’s character revolves around Bella as her mate and not much else.
While I understand the obsessive mindset of a vampire with a human mate, there was room for a bit more depth to Rose exploring her own hobbies to distract herself from her worry in my opinion. I feel like we get to know Alice and Jazz more as people than Rosalie after the first few chapters. (Though the same could be argued with Alice simply being a plot device and not a ‘character driven’ individual.)
That said my romantic little heart sings with joy at the simple pleasure of reading these two discovering their boundaries and affections. I especially enjoyed the little side romance with Paul and Angela. Simple and sweet, allowing Bella to have a human counterpart to converse with.
Thank you for sharing your work, it was a pleasure to read.
That was a wonderful story! I really appreciated the pace of the plot, you kept things interesting. My only suggestion is that the character development was a bit lacking, by that I mean Rosalie’s character revolves around Bella as her mate and not much else.
While I understand the obsessive mindset of a vampire with a human mate, there was room for a bit more depth to Rose exploring her own hobbies to distract herself from her worry in my opinion. I feel like we get to know Alice and Jazz more as people than Rosalie after the first few chapters. (Though the same could be argued with Alice simply being a plot device and not a ‘character driven’ individual.)
That said my romantic little heart sings with joy at the simple pleasure of reading these two discovering their boundaries and affections. I especially enjoyed the little side romance with Paul and Angela. Simple and sweet, allowing Bella to have a human counterpart to converse with.
Thank you for sharing your work, it was a pleasure to read.
5/13/2024 c34 Guest
Loved this story so much
Loved this story so much
5/14/2024 c34 TxTwilight321
Love this dynamic! Thank you for the epilogue!
You are probably done, but the drive, change, and first month would be amazibg to read as well. Especially woth this kind and loving Rosalie.
Thank you for taking the time to write this fic it was thoroughly enjoyed.
Love this dynamic! Thank you for the epilogue!
You are probably done, but the drive, change, and first month would be amazibg to read as well. Especially woth this kind and loving Rosalie.
Thank you for taking the time to write this fic it was thoroughly enjoyed.
5/5/2024 c34 
5Le Diablo Blanc2
this has been my favorite rosella fic for a long time it was a truly amazing ride
lol now im gonna read it all the way from the start again
5Le Diablo Blanc2this has been my favorite rosella fic for a long time it was a truly amazing ride
lol now im gonna read it all the way from the start again
5/5/2024 c34 1catgrl
Oh wow sounds like Bella and Rosalie had a lot of fun in one year. Wish there was a little more to hear about Bella’s newborn year and if Charlie found a mate.
1catgrlOh wow sounds like Bella and Rosalie had a lot of fun in one year. Wish there was a little more to hear about Bella’s newborn year and if Charlie found a mate.
10/21/2023 c33 catgrl198
Ahh so Bella has graduated high school and now is off on an adventure. Glad Charlie got to see Bella walk to get her diploma from afar. So it sounds like Charlie will be staying in Alaska for a while. Can’t wait for the next update.
Ahh so Bella has graduated high school and now is off on an adventure. Glad Charlie got to see Bella walk to get her diploma from afar. So it sounds like Charlie will be staying in Alaska for a while. Can’t wait for the next update.
10/12/2023 c32 3Pinkypi
I don't know why everyone makes it so only Jasper really knows how to fight. The boot camp in eclipse was specifically for the wolves and not the family itself. The only thing they did was brush up on tactics for fighting Newborns as opposed to more controlled opponents. I mean don't get me wrong, Jasper is totes their best fighter with Edward and Alice only relying on their gifts to equalize the field, but all of the Cullen coven were proficient at it.
3PinkypiI don't know why everyone makes it so only Jasper really knows how to fight. The boot camp in eclipse was specifically for the wolves and not the family itself. The only thing they did was brush up on tactics for fighting Newborns as opposed to more controlled opponents. I mean don't get me wrong, Jasper is totes their best fighter with Edward and Alice only relying on their gifts to equalize the field, but all of the Cullen coven were proficient at it.