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10/24 c18 Mattroxursoul
Last force vision? Shame I enjoy that part of the story. It builds up to multiple things going on at once. At least luke did not have to perform that dees
10/24 c11 Mattroxursoul
Great chapter. The idea to just walk away makes some sense. Yet it also leaves the clones in a bad spot.
10/24 c7 Mattroxursoul
Great work. Entering diplomacy. How quaint of the Jedi. Time to rebuild his saber right? Makes sense cause Luke always seemed more like a consular type. Better in tune with the force than a straight duelist.

Poor luke though only kisses he gets are from sister and mom. What next kiss his apprentice? Cause that is kind of close to the same thing lol.

Suppose luke did not realize what happens to Ahsoka and how that could happen soon.
10/24 c6 Mattroxursoul
Funny enough the beat part of prequels was clone wars show. It actually filled the void on characters. Making the clones human and adding depth. They are a tragedy of the greatest order to my mind. Good job on working with them
10/24 c5 Mattroxursoul
Punching Tarkin is always right. Sure alderaan bombing was awful. But more important he is mean to Ahsoka. Screw him.
10/24 c1 Mattroxursoul
Interesting idea. One problem though. He has to do the nasty in the pasty. As a man of culture even I have some lines.
10/12 c34 David12leca
You have tremendous skills in writing take a bow fantastic fanfiction
10/11 c33 David12leca
it was a nice chapter a good feel good chapter sometimes its what you need in a story.
10/11 c32 David12leca
I did not see that coming one bit holy shit
10/7 c34 188Virodeil
Oh. Ow. I hope this story will end happily. O_O The chapter began okay, then came the vision... We were forewarned, but I still felt kinda unprepared. Still, thank you for writing and posting this chapter. :)
Rey
10/2 c34 3Ironhidensh
See, now I’m glad I kept reading!
10/2 c28 Ironhidensh
This chapter has me almost wanting to stop reading. I won’t, but damn man. How can you possibly ever be happy after that.
9/30 c34 CMdkelley
While I admit that there are parts that I consider disjointed, or I dislike some aspects of the story (seriously Leah being evil), overall I am enjoying this well written if psychedelic look into the possibilities.
9/30 c34 NotSerious4Fun
Despise Anakin and Padme getting back together
9/30 c34 51Courtesy Trefflin
About what Padme did… I think that if she truly loved Anakin more than herself (which is quite debatable, I suppose, looking at the Clone Wars series), she would have tried to understand what happened to “him” as well as tried to help “him,” instead of running off and getting into a relationship with her older sister. Lol. She seems to have a severe case of narcissism. And about Luke… he might be nicer than Anakin, but he’s not more compassionate, which is what matters to me.

I adored Anakin and Luke flying together and bonding! Their relationship is one of my top favorites in the fandom. It must be wonderful for Anakin to have someone who truly understands his culture and where he came from. Cody and Leia’s interactions were… interesting albeit very weird. Lol. Time travel or not, the thought of them having a relationship like that is… ugh. I feel so bad for Leia though. Having to witness Palpatine slaughter his family must have been horrible. And knowing that Sidious is… in her somehow must be terrifying, especially when she knows what he did in the future. Oof. Another awesomely written chapter! :D
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